Invincible in the Shadows

Several problems with the story: 1) the protagonist is called jin although his parents are Debbie and Nolan and he lives in America 2) he acts without thought of the consequence and he really has no consequences because he kills bad guys and Cecil doesn't notice anything whereas in the series Cecil knows everything and observes. He would never let Jin kill bad guys like that 3) there is too much transition. 1 chapter before he killed a bad guy, the next chapter saw him stop a robbery. There is no dialogue between the characters, you have the impression that the story is speeding up.

please don't harem. .. ....,.........,..

Needs a lot of work.. author might not speak English because there’s a bit of Korean/Chinese young master influence. Could just be a mediocre translation. Story starts with mc, author gives all these stats about him, but doesn’t even write basic info about mc, including age. It’s just immediate mc oc wakes up with memories and just starts being a hero. Nothing written about mark, the mom, or dads interaction when mc gets powers. Very superficial story, nothing concrete that gives life to the fic.

MC is an idiot , which is an immediate drop for me . the writing quality is also very bad .

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Interesting concept but weak foundation 😫😫 You can do more💪💪💪💪💪💪. GDJBVT5RKDKV5HJFTB66UFQJFNUO3HG46BAMYEYDENJSS3UM3ALYEZ4MGDJBVT5RKDKV5HJFTB66UFQJFNUO3HG46BAMYEYDENJSS3UM3ALYEZ4MGDJBVT5RKDKV5HJFTB66UFQJFNUO3HG46BAMYEYDENJSS3UM3ALYEZ4M

I read 7 chapters with difficulty, I still prefer to go and make myself a good coffee and I hate coffee.

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