It is my first fan fiction. And it's not a translation, I am not good at English, as English is my second language. And I don't care if you have different perspective about any character, but I changed many thing as its my fan fiction and in a fan fiction anything can be written.
I am ready to hear your opinion for improvement.
Female MC, romance not sure about it yet but at most it will be yuri.
10 chapter mass release, with follow up of 1 chapter/week.
It's a great fanfic to read. I hope it doesn't get dropped half way..................................................................................
interesting read with a female mc in culivation novel looking forawrd to reading it all will rec it for now so give it a go :D ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................
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PLS don't drop this, and do updates every week if possible
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A really cool fanfic, I especially loved the protagonist's martial spirit after the evolution. The way the protagonist got the first two spirit rings was also perfect, especially the first one. The reason I didn't give it 5 stars is that the achievement levels of the protagonist's achievement cheat are very arbitrary. She got a gold level achievement for reading a book she bought while killing an enemy 3 levels above her was silver level. The level of some achievements seems to have been decided based on the level of the reward the author wanted to give the protagonist instead of the actual level of the achievement. The second reason I didn't give it 5 stars is that the fic suddenly introduced another reincarnator from Earth who also has a cheat. Since the character barely appeared for a chapter I'm not taking any more stars away, but I still don't understand how the hell the author thought it would be a good idea to add another reincarnator to the fic when it's more or less a consensus that this kind of thing ruins fics even more than an omnipotent MC.