Soul Land: Achievement Complete

It's a great fanfic to read. I hope it doesn't get dropped half way..................................................................................

Well, it was refreshing seeing a Douluo Dalu fanfic that was not a freakin' subpar translation riddled with weird chinese nationalism that the proclaimed translators ,who swear they don't use AI for translation even though they do, keep anyway while shamelessly posting a patreon link. The story is nice, grammar is good but the dialogue is weird, The dialogue between the MC and all the shop vendors was cringe at best. The system is very generous with the rewards even when completing very small and simple tasks. The first soul ring of the protagonist was obtained in an unconventional way to say the least, but God was the process infuriating. Nearly screamed in frustration throughout Ch 6. But hey at least the idea is new and not structured like the 60+ translated Chinese fanfics on this shitty website, that allows subpar translators to flood the front page like nothing, that are good for wasting time at best. Hope you get better at constructing a narrative and developing a natural conversation between the characters without compromising their IQ and EQ.

interesting read with a female mc in culivation novel looking forawrd to reading it all will rec it for now so give it a go :D ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................

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A really cool fanfic, I especially loved the protagonist's martial spirit after the evolution. The way the protagonist got the first two spirit rings was also perfect, especially the first one. The reason I didn't give it 5 stars is that the achievement levels of the protagonist's achievement cheat are very arbitrary. She got a gold level achievement for reading a book she bought while killing an enemy 3 levels above her was silver level. The level of some achievements seems to have been decided based on the level of the reward the author wanted to give the protagonist instead of the actual level of the achievement. The second reason I didn't give it 5 stars is that the fic suddenly introduced another reincarnator from Earth who also has a cheat. Since the character barely appeared for a chapter I'm not taking any more stars away, but I still don't understand how the hell the author thought it would be a good idea to add another reincarnator to the fic when it's more or less a consensus that this kind of thing ruins fics even more than an omnipotent MC.

PLS don't drop this, and do updates every week if possible

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