I Became a Jonin, and Only Now the System Arrives

starting was good but don't make mc saint who gives everyone powers

Since he’s a yamanaka, shouldn’t he have like blonde hair? What’s with the thumbnail?

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I think it has potential, I hope it's not like your other Uchiha fic where he unlocked the Mangekyou and could revive people, that he doesn't become a babysitter, that would be great, I really have expectations, good luck 🍀

The romance tag is missing and should be added. It's one of those fanfics where the mc is subconsciously guided by his stick very predictable clique misunderstanding, and honestly could be seen as "self fulfilment" fic this review isn't well written,

So far everything is great, I like the length of the chapters, they are not too big and not too short, keep up the good work and you will have a masterpiece!!

good enough for now who knows the future only god

Thanks for your feedback! I'm really happy to see all these great comments. This is the first time I've seen you write nine reviews in just two days—even without me asking! I hope this story won’t disappoint you

anything that makes danzo suffer deserves 5 star danzo suffers what more reason do you need to read it?

this seems promising, I grew tired of kid MCs on Naruto fics.

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the concept is very cool and interesting, I already liked the beginning, please don't abandon it, and yes, I wonder what happened to Minato, he and Kushina had love after saving her when they were about 14 years old, and here in the story they are already 19

can you post the original raw name Or. something