Liam, a nerd obsessed with DC comics who dies miserably in his first life, he gets a another chance as he is reborn in the world he fantasiesed all his life but nothing goes in his favor as he goes through pain and suffering but resisting it all in hope for better origin story but when disaster struck gods didn't answer his calls, but the devil did.
You gotta stop separating paragraphs to idk extend the page, makes it hard to read. Other than that it’s cool so far.
DMC X Dc now that's A unique combination! great start Author keep it up!
good story so far I like it i will recommend it
Am big fan for dmc if try to messed up this i will chowe you somthing great than you think . gagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagagaga
Bro, the truth is your story is good, but let him give so many weapons to your MC, instead he should use demonic energy to develop an ability like Dante's Devil Trigger from the spin-off, so he could be a little stronger without cheating him too much. Well, that's my humble opinion, it's your story and honestly, you have my support.
I'll update my review later (i won't ) , Great start Fentanyl Dante. keep up the good work. 👊👊👊👊