Reborn as Kaguya In Naruto Then Boruto

5 5 4 2 5 This is more tips for the author then a real review, but here goes: First off, I would recommend giving chapters a title, even if it's just "Chapter x", as it feels more comfortable to read. Furthermore, you use bold too freely, the fact that you use it is great, but if you used it a bit less, solely to emphasize important words for example, your chapters would be much smoother and it would give impact to the bold. Next, you seem to idolize Kaguya, I know this is a crackfic, but for her to have 100 10-Tails, all of them considerably stronger than her is just illogical. Cuz either she I should be incapable of creating smthm so powerful, or she should consume them and make herself stronger. P.S. the seal suppresses her Chakra which should make her unable to do anything but whatever TLDR: pretty good book for your 2nd attempt just af few things to fix. Not the best caracters, but your grammar is a marathon ahead of other people on this site, so props to you. Gl for this book and the next. :D