"Stupid! 3 + 3 equals 7?" The red-haired boy was so angry that he smacked the yellow-haired boy on the head with his fist.
"Ow! That hurts, brother!" the yellow-haired boy cried, clutching his head.
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"Brother, what are we eating today?"
"Don't bother cooking—let's go eat at Grandpa Third's house."
to much chinese and TL left a lot of chinese cliche parts non edited plus mc is too bald and dumb starting felt mid asf hope the later chapters improve it
I'm adding it to the top 10 in my reading list of Naruto fan-fic Really good I highly recommend reading this really good no system hardworking and self knowledgeable mc, takes good care of his brother not that much power hungry, he didn't try to steal other characters future wife if not he tries to make them a match from the start Author I have a request about the female lead if you haven't decided yet I would like to say could you take the priestess of the land of demons Shion as the love interest just saying there is not many fan-fic with her as the love interest
I really likes the story. . Could you share the name of the raw .................................................................................................................. ...................................... ... .
this had potential might be good or might be not
I LOVE the story yes It has those Chinese stuff but you can easily ignore it. I love the dynamics between the brother and the comedy that occurs. Keep up the good work author!
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Sounds like a interesting story can’t wait to find out how the story’s turn out!
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