In a world where 80% of the population have extraordinary abilities known as quirks, an occupation was made for those who wanted to be something more and the word Hero was made but there's the 20% that are dubbed quirkless, with one of them having the worst luck, but what if, it was turned around when he was younger? what if his life changed when he met someone from long ago and what if he showed the world his power of Domination?
Right now the story is in its early stages so I don’t want to just rip into something that can be really good. But I am not a fan of your Izuku so far. It feels like your forcing him to be an issei clone. I have good hopes for this story cause it doesn’t seem to be a Translation and there hasn’t been many good original mha stories. Also you don’t have to put the names in front of whose talking in each conversation with every line it breaks up the flow of the story.
Too early to fully review anything just want to support since it looks interesting
..............nice keep up the good work