Fairy Tail: The Son of Gildarts

Author's Review here- The first couple of chapters may be a bit short but don't worry about it gets fixed after the first 10 chapters or so. If you have any doubts trust me, it will be a good read. No harem story. Mc is the same age as Laxus and is chill like Shanks so yeah. Come and enjoy the ride

not enough chapters to make an in depth review however it looks promising as i like the magic the MC posses which is power of destruction. Hopefully will not be dropped so soon.

I honestly like it, plus it's NOT a translation, so that's a plus

The idea for fanfiction is very attractive, but its implementation leaves much to be desired. The author regularly makes changes to the plot, and his system does not cause irritation. However, it is felt that the author does not have enough experience: he talks too much, but does not show it. For example, he wrote that "Fairy Tail" is like a family, but did not demonstrate this in practice. Moreover, he showed that the Fairy Tail is unable to take care of a child, sending him alone on missions to destroy monsters. When he did not return, they did not bother to check whether he was being held against his will or deceived. The characters remain unsolved, and it seems that they are just brainless dummies created only to advance the plot. I also don't like the pace of the novel: when the hero first joined Fairy Tail, you could have put more emphasis on getting to know the main guild members, describing their relationships, and creating that Fairy Tail spirit. However, the author did not do this. Nevertheless, the author tries hard, and it is clear that he wants to rewrite the first chapters. I'm looking forward to seeing what he can do in the end.

The grammar is quite decent, and that's the only compliment I can give on the writing. Genuinely the worst pacing I've ever seen, it's an utter mish mash of ideas with zero coherence at all. Close to no research done on the world building or possibly just such bad writing that none of it shows. I tried to read and enjoy it but bloody hell this makes the Chinese translation garbage flooding this site look like masterpieces

Please more! For the beginning it is very good 👍 I hope you will continue it ! For the beginning I will give 4 points. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Nice...a new fanfic character. Gildart's son. Can't wait to see what changes under Shanks... will he be chosen as one of the ranks of holy wizards? Maybe there was a moment where Shanks said to his guildmates.." I'm here to save my friends".. I can feel the goosebumps

The story is good and looks like Canon is just starting so the story will develop even more as it gains momentum. I like her interactions with other characters, especially the way she greets her irresponsible father. It's like whatever transmigrated MC deliberately hid the information about One Piece, she remembers Naruto-Fairy Tail-Dragon Ball but not One Piece. But she encountered some mysterious missions that taught her Haki so she's not ignorant about Haki, in fact her Haki is strong. The obvious downside is that the timeline is wrong, I hope the author edited Mc and Cana's ages and changed them in the previous chapters or people will get confused. I hope the author reads this and adds to the story's Tags, because she mentioned there will only be 1 FML, so the No-Harem tag is for the benefit of many people, it hasn't been determined who will be FML but my vote is for Erza. It seems like it will be a good series as the chapters' length and narration improve. I recommend it. (Note: If it doesn't save someone's life, all readers will be upset that he lost his arm, I warn you.)

story is great and i really like the premise of shanks in fairy tail, but my only complaint is how small each chapter is. It feels as if the moment you start it is already over. Other than the shortness of the chapters i really like the story, and that there wont be a harem. hope the story continue for a long while with frequent updates. :D

I like this fanfic. The system doesn't just exchange cheating skills like other stories. I hope it will be gradual. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

I'll be severely disappointed if this gets dropped I like gildarts And shanks is just gildarts but a pirate AND NO ARM Anyway continue please

(4.8) There isn't enough content to predict the direction the story will take in the future, but for now the quality is great, the MC's personality is very nice and the system is simple, it doesn't bother or try to control him.

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