Naruto: A Spark Among Leaves
Title: A spark among the leaves
Synopsis:
When a boy from our world dies unexpectedly, he awakens in the body of a nameless war orphan in the Naruto universe—during the brutal chaos of the Third Great Ninja War. With no memories from the body’s former soul and no miraculous powers to rely on, Ren is forced to survive with only his wits, fractured knowledge of the future, and the emotional scars of two lost best friends.
Surrounded by bloodshed, suspicion, and abandonment, Ren slowly carves a place for himself among orphans like him—children considered expendable in a world at war. As he learns the shinobi language, battles hunger, and trains under a gruff jonin with a haunted past, Ren finds something strange beginning to grow: purpose.
Guided by a meditation technique from his past life and the stubborn will to live, Ren isn’t here to change the world. He just wants to survive it.
---
Great take on a realistic Naruto fic. I think this is pretty underrated and a cover would help boost this fics popularity 👍
The story progresses slowly but nicely. He filled in the gaps in Naruto nicely but I don't think it should take this long to extract chakra. I think he should have learned what 6 year olds can do within 1 month at the latest.
the book is good a slow burn some parts get repeated a little bit over all a good story much differs different than other Naruto stories
okay je peux dire que jaime beaucoup ce cote realiste on le voit pas souvent sa me rappele un peu outsider resolution donc cest deja un plus dapres moi
Keep writing the novel is good so far don't try to make the hero too strong like the other novels
Alright so a few things after reading chapter 31. First off this fic is slow, like in the first 20 chapters basically nothing happened except for chores, a few character introductions, and a little training (not enough to get strong mc is basically a slightly stronger child that can throw a punch at that point.) After that things pick up a bit. Also I don't know exactly how to explain it but the writing feels kind of mechanical not sure if ai was used for the story or for spell checking or what but it comes off as a bit of that. Overall, realistic world which is good, character interactions are decent, main character so far seems to be lacking a personality and he kinda seems hollow.
story is grounded and character is learning slowly. Story is progressing slowly as well. Character is not overpowered like other fanfiction. It is understandable that the chapter is weak