In a world split between ordinary lives and extraordinary power, the Awakened are governed by Creedshift —national organizations that trains and controls those who wield supernatural abilities. Rift anomalies, combat classes, regulated missions — power here comes with rules, and rules come with chains.
But not for him.
Now, in a world where creeds—those awakened with power—are monitored, ranked, and trained under a single organization, peace is paper-thin.
Because powers still grow.
Bloodlines still evolve.
And globally, the Plague still spreads.
In the middle of this quiet tension, a boy named Aryl survives.
Weak in body, quiet in presence. He hides behind promises, trauma, and shadows.
Until the day comes when he can no longer stay hidden.
And something deep within him…
responds.
Not power.
Not a gift.
Something far older. Something watching.
A throne without a king.
A rise without permission.
A boy without a crown—but never beneath one.
The first chapter was engaging . I will recommend you keep it dark and if you think it's getting too dark then put some comedy relief in it . Also put some psychological elements in it .
See imma be honest here this story has alot of potential but the writer seems unserious about this work maybe because he thinks that its bad but i just wanted to say if he can some actual eforrts into this it can be great as the initial phase of story building is very nice this guy took a great shot there. And wordplay also looks professional. Keep it up [img=strong][img=strong]
I came from reddit post , it feels engaging i would love it if you try to theme this out little less dark. This is my trope and I'll wait for next chapters