My Dungeon Comedy is Wrong, As Expected.

Hello everyone! I'm the author of this story, and I'm really excited to see your reactions. Since this is my own work, of course I’m giving it a top rating (lol), but what truly matters is your honest opinion. Constructive criticism about the plot is more than welcome — I want to grow this project together with your feedback! If the reception is positive, I plan to release 2 to 3 new chapters per week here on Webnovel. For those who want early access, the more advanced chapters will be available first on my Patreon. I hope you enjoy the story and join me on this journey!

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looking forward for more!!! update often plsssssss

I have read 24 chapters. It good story. Op skill, but not very op hachiman. But I think he will be op. Main goddes not hestia. Story doesn’t follow bell. 10/10

Overall amazing, most stories are slop or kinda eh that just neeed more time to cook or rewrite. This is not one of them, honestly I love everything,the character, the pace and ect. Worth a read and happy I did not skip it! Good work my man!

Honestly, pretty decent. There is just a lot of ways that this could have been better. Hachiman should have just not had information about who Aqua is. Him knowing her through Kono Suba kind of tainted the interaction. Experiencing her incompetence firsthand would have made way more of an impression. The Skill and the Magic, likewise, would have been better off having been earned after some firsthand experience but since they are kind of a 'boon', maybe even just give one (probably the Protection of a Loner) and have Hachiman earn the Magic the traditional way. Just having stuff dumped on the MC cheapens the story a lot. The story is decent overall though, but having a more dynamic world for the reader to sink into would easily bump this up to good or even great.

This story is really interesting. Please keep the updates coming! .

Everything so far is good, keep up the good work! And please don't drop it!

Looking at reviews to see if this is good? It is. An actual good story. Characters are good and not all over the place. From what i can tell there will be a story that would build up. Review made Current chapter 10 - 12 And no its not MTL so there is no need of worrying about Young masters and no need to worry of lines like. Jade like beauties, Courting death, and ceaseless self praise and not in a good way.

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