Danmachi: I'm God in Orario

The grammar is horrendous it makes it so hard to read. And the genders keep ketting mixed up

Interesting premise, but it has some grammar and translation errors, which end up confusing laymen, but apart from that it is quite interesting.

I'll be honest here the name Don make since for danmachi xin is a Chinese name there is no Chinese God in danmachi the translation is decent enough to understand but it still confusing and it is hestia not heatia at leat get that right

original name?............................................................................................................................................................................

Good story, Share the raw name or what website you see the fanfic.

Reading on MTL would be much better than this.

i thought this was a translation, but I remember now why everything is familiar, ur LittleApple and this is your new account. Xin was that multiverse fanfic character name that u usually use.

nah the grammar is ahh, like sooooo ahh, idk how the book has such high rating. i can only assume that he deletes comments

The premise of the story is good. But unfortunately the grammar is so bad that it burns a lot of brain cells. 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄

the grammaer is...horrible😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨

A fanfic é boa, mas alguém sabe o nome da raw ou o site? se possível... gostaria de saber.................................................................

The book is quite interesting, but I think that the author should proofread and edit their work so that it flows smoothly.

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Hey if the book is translated can you share me the raw name