Danmachi: I'm God in Orario

The grammar is horrendous it makes it so hard to read. And the genders keep ketting mixed up

Interesting premise, but it has some grammar and translation errors, which end up confusing laymen, but apart from that it is quite interesting.

I'll be honest here the name Don make since for danmachi xin is a Chinese name there is no Chinese God in danmachi the translation is decent enough to understand but it still confusing and it is hestia not heatia at leat get that right

original name?............................................................................................................................................................................

Good story, Share the raw name or what website you see the fanfic.

i thought this was a translation, but I remember now why everything is familiar, ur LittleApple and this is your new account. Xin was that multiverse fanfic character name that u usually use.

A fanfic é boa, mas alguém sabe o nome da raw ou o site? se possível... gostaria de saber.................................................................

The book is quite interesting, but I think that the author should proofread and edit their work so that it flows smoothly.

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Hey if the book is translated can you share me the raw name

Yeah... Can't handle the translation, there are a lot of mispelled words that is kind of irritating, the premise is good though. Just a lot of translation errors, to the point I would rather read the raws.

The premise sounds interesting but the grammar and spelling mistakes, make reading it a chore.