One Rinnegan To Rule Them All (Naruto SI)
A clanless orphan, that is who I was, who I was supposed to be.
But no, that was not all I was, not all I am, not at all.
I am a soul from Beyond. One that saw this world from a higher perspective, saw its past, present and future.
Somehow I was reborn into this world in Konoha as a clanless boy. But a soul from Beyond of course within the laws of this world is special.
Yin. Spirit. Darkness. Imagination. Form.
That is what Yin is. Now combine that - an amount of Yin Chakra beyond any normal soul -with diluted Uchiha blood from generations ago, blood that within it holds the diluted blood of the Otsutsuki,
And the self-preservatory nature of the human body - a body unsuited for such an imbalance of Yin and Yang and what one gets is the awakening of the genes filled with Yang of Otsutsuki Hagoromo.
Together it formes the Eye that holds the Sight of the Heavens.
The Rinnegan.
Making me, the Second Coming.
The Second Coming of the Sage of the Six Paths.
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(Author note: Hello everyone so, I had another idea, in Naruto, with the Rinnegan (In the beginning it will be a single Rinnegan - the right eye only.), not because of wishes, or experiments, or karma, or whatever,
but the nature of being a reincarnator soul from another world, giving absurd Yin Chakra, that to be balanced out, the body draws from the genes of Hagoromo, filled with Balanced pattern of Yin and Yang that are dormant normally in the uchiha blood, awakened, and together forming the Rinnegan.
Though understand, the Main Character - Indra (that's his name, he isn't Indra reincarnated), isn't gonna flaunt his rinnegan.
It will be hidden and the trump card, but he will still be quite the powerful shinobi with having the sharingan, and using the Rinnegan wisely, when necessary.
Obito is out there after all, we don't want him to poke our MC's eyes out.
Well, I hope to see you all soon,
Bye!)
Okay, I gotta make a review for this so people know what's gonna happen. Now, Indra (the Main Character) is a genius, quite talented, but because of his insane amount of Yin energy being imbalanced compared to his Yang, when he is a child will not have that good chakra control (BESIDES WHEN THE RINNEGAN IS ACTIVE) The rinnegan gives insane amounts of chakra, chakra control, as well as an inherent talent in all 5 basic nature transformations and of course all its other abilities. Now, when the Rinnegan is NOT ACTIVE IT WON'T GIVE THESE BENEFITS. Just like when a sharingan is not active, you can't see things in slow motion or have a passive chakra buff, so long as the Rinnegan is in active he doesn't have these buffs. The rinnegan he can activate and deactivate because he awakened it himself like Madara. When as a 13 year old kid it is active, he is for 5 minutes (before losing chakra, since the Rinnegan takes a lot of Chakra and he 13 years old and not a monster like Madara and Obito yet who had tailed beast levels of chakra and insane control from Hashi cells) He is KAGE LEVEL FOR THOSE 5 MINUTES. And kage ranges from bums like Danzo to monsters like Hashi. He is in the lower echelons of Kage in those 5 minutes. Now, I hope that cleared it up for people, and I hope you are still willing to read. See you all later, Bye!
Okay, just something I wish to tell those who have a problem with my other fics not all being completed. I'm currently daily dropping 1 chapter for 3 different fics - this one, Grand Regent Thragg, and Archangel Son of Luthor. If you have a problem with the fact they and others aren't focused on solely and made 100s of chapters of that's fine, but make the bad review on those books rather than a new one, since I don't appreciate new ones I'm making being tanked that others gloss over them because they think the fic is bad. I put a lot of effort in my fics and all my chapters are at minimum 2k to 4k words long and sometimes even 5k to 10k words long. Sure, you'll probably see some of my other fics at 40 or so chapters on a bit of a break, but virtually all of them have 100k + words, I prefer writing quality over quantity, since when I myself read, short chapters are a pain because it feels like it took seconds for days of waiting. Well, I hope this doesn't bother you guys and that you do keep reading. See you all later, Bye
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I can see where this story is heading, and honestly, I don’t think it’ll last very long, you’ll probably end up dropping it. Don’t take that the wrong way, though. Your writing style is solid: the dialogue feels natural, the pacing is better than most fanfics out there, and you clearly know how to build an engaging story. But that’s exactly why it might not work out, as a fanfic. Most people who read fanfiction aren’t necessarily looking for deep emotions, tragedy, or character self-development the way they would in an original story. They’re often looking for something more familiar or entertaining within the existing universe. You’ve got real talent when it comes to storytelling, and that’s why I think you should consider writing an original work. You already have the foundation to create something unique that truly stands out. Ps. Took me 10 min to write this shit 👌
bruh why the RI cover pic it made me hella confused while looking for this fic also 5 stars for my man samael
I haven't read it yet, but since it has the cover of Great Love Immortal Venerable, it deserves 5 stars. Don't disappoint, author!⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
meh i don't like it and won't say why that is like the 5 star reviews
waste of time shit says sharingan can be de evolve to one tomoe by reducing chara flow like wtf
this is just another story where the "mc hides his power". he can somehow revert the rinnegan back to 1 tomoe sharingan lol. author argues that by "logic", mc should really hide bc obito would rip his eye out. by his l0Gic, the world should probably have the 6th world war now just to get the rinnegan since nagato was not technically hiding his rinnegan when yahiko was still alive and the akatsuki had many members
this is such a cool concept. I like that the author is expanding the lore and making the world seem more mythological
This is some good shit really except for the low chapter count. For me personally, It's simply perfect (well except for the harem part.... but you gotta make some sacrifices)
it's good read it. s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s s what are are you still here for, cookies?
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The fanfic is good and has good progression till now. The world building is alright, well it's Naruto... Anyway the writing quality is Good, Considering the amount of trash books in this site- this is excellent quality, the character interactions feels alive and done right. Well the only thing I don't like is the possibility of more than 1 love interest, I haven't reduced any stars due to that cause it's my preference and it really don't effect the quality and progression of the book... I hope it stays that way, I look forward to seeing this fic's completion. All the best author 👍🏼
This story is very good and written by a wonderful author who can back what he says, though I will say if you look at his bibliography you can see that he doesn’t have a very good record of finishing his stories, I don’t rate a book based on the author’s shortcomings the same way I won’t say Graduation is bad even tho Kanye has said some crazy things. But if u can’t get into a story that won’t be finished (not saying this won’t be) don’t read it