CYOA in DC

Mandatory 5 Star review by Author. Please give your takes and criticism, as I am here to improve.

This is great,I thought it would be just another boring power collection and harem DC fanfic but it's surprisingly thoughtful and calculated keep it up author!!!!!

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really cool story got me hooked 5 chapters in (im at chapter 10) not much grammar mistakes, although its confusing why superman seems like he knows raj? he should be feeling confused as to why a teen that fell from a portal in the sky would know so much secrets not suprised at how a kid he barely knows has "changed" so much 🤣 the line "hes changed" confused me so much, did superman get to know raj when he was on a coma from source wall information overload? how? and its weird how he kept the Original roy harper after rescuing him, keeping match is understandable since we all know what happened to canon match 🤣 but roy ended up kinda fine, he needs a looooot of therapy tho does raj need a sidekick that bad? anyways besides that its fine, althoughit would be more awesome if he could make a moon base, a volcano base and a deep sea base plus a whole lot of safe houses around the world dude could steal from the big criminal organizations after tipping off the non currupt officers why 3 big bases? why not? ya gotta rotate to keep people guessing ooooh! and maybe a megaman gun arm and maybe the marvel rivals Bucky ult for close and mid range CQC for Roy also, I hope it isnt BL tho, please just let this be a brotherly bond lol

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It good author put a lot of though into it and researched dc with the thing in his head better then most out there

Can't wait for more chapters!..........................................................................................................................

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Thanks for the chapters, hope to see more chapters soon and i find the concept of this novel really good, so i hope to see you keep going forward in writing and don't get demotivated or something like that, take care and have a happy day. Thanks for you hard work and keep up the great work.

Better than most stuff on this site. Maybe could be a little less wordy but it’s fine. Keep up the good work…………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………..

Great start to the story I hope the author keeps it up and doesn’t drop it.

This story is amazing the writing in the story development is amazing. You’re gonna enjoy reading this.

A really good DC fanfic, it's super hard to find a decent one like this. Also it's a complete one, that's a plus. That ending kinda felt rushing, but overall a great final chapter. Especially loved that final touch. Gotta hand it to the author for going through DC characters that are not that well known. Especially the use of superpower wiki, loved the different powers and their uses. Great work there. My personal opinion, Instead of rushing through each universes, could've freshed out an arc for each one. But hey, I'm not author or someone who can write anything close to this level. All the best to the Author, hope to see more fics of this kind. Keep Rocking... [img=recommend]