Naruto: The Opportunity Plunderer
When an overworked, sleep-deprived genius from Earth wakes up in the world of Naruto—reborn as an unknown orphan in the Hidden Leaf—he’s not alone.
With him comes the Opportunity Plunder System, a broken cheat that lets him steal other people's chances, talent, and fortuitous encounters… as long as he notices them in time.
From snatching Sasuke’s fateful "cool rival" aura to hijacking Naruto’s accidental bonding moments with Hinata, no golden opportunity is safe. Need to master a forbidden jutsu?
Just “plunder” the opportunity before someone else does.
Want a powerful dojutsu? Oops, someone was about to awaken it—yoink!
Armed with a razor-sharp tongue, an unhealthy obsession with playing matchmaker (when not stealing the girl himself), and a mind that makes Shikamaru look like a slacker, the MC dances through the shinobi world, turning canon upside down.
As he builds a harem of kunoichi, outwits ancient conspiracies, and toys with fate itself, even the Ōtsutsuki start getting nervous.
Because when fate gives others a chance, he takes it for himself.
And so begins the legend of the man who didn’t just chase destiny…
He stole it.
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Author’s Note
Hello, dear readers!
Thank you so much for choosing to read my Naruto fanfiction.
This story is a passion project, created out of love and admiration for Masashi Kishimoto’s incredible world.
Please note that this is purely a fan-made work, and all rights, characters, and original concepts belong solely to Masashi Kishimoto and the Naruto franchise.
I hope you’ll enjoy this unique journey where new twists, characters, and destinies unfold.
If you’re enjoying the story, your support—through likes, comments, and sharing—means the world and motivates me to keep writing more!
Now, let’s dive into the journey together!
— [Azure Dragon ]
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Still too early to deduce a lot but here's what I can say + Decent concept + MC has legendary gene selection + Not giving MTL vibe - Short Chapters - The way the paragraphs are spaced is really annoying - Hints of AI ( Not TOO sure)
ok so lets start with stop posting the system every chapter once the system initiates. stop using AI so much for so little words per chapter i mean theres little to no sustenance in each chapter cor the love of god you could have made it all into one single chapter and it wouldnt be as long as other novels single chapters. its a great idea for a story but thats it.
is it Original or translation.............
Standard OP story. The MC is already OP at 3 years old. The system spoon feed him in every sense of the way. The chapters are short and the system interface is used to fill the word counts. Overall, I wouldn’t give a passing grade besides the grammar
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Overall It's Good try to maintain constitency and make sure to use more characters and provide a background story on the characters who appeared on Naruto series though remained as background character try to make them be in spotlight
Still Early to say but hope this works out to the author to continue the work no matter what and complete it
Let's hope for best this time it gas a potential to be a good one let's hope it turns out as I say it is okay bye .......... Oh forget it just don't make it like any shit one
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The story has potential but for me I don’t think I can enjoy this writer there are too many inconsistencies from chapter to chapter weather it’s 3 straight chapters about 1 scene. Bringing in characters that were never scene up until they show up. Also the pacing is horrible
Might be a good story but I can’t take the writing style where half the chapter only has two or so words per paragraph. Reminds of of Chinese fanfictiona a few years ago before ai lol.
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1. The story's core idea is captivating, but improvements in pacing and deeper exploration of the protagonist's motivations could enhance tension and emotional depth. 2. Enhancing world-building with sensory details and consistent application of the world's rules can make the environment more immersive and impactful on characters. 3. Strengthening dialogue to reflect unique character voices and intensifying conflict can drive the plot forward, even in quieter moments.