The Weightless Knight

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This has some serious potential. Revian’s situation is rough but that’s what makes the story so compelling. The interactions with Garron and the rest of Class F are great, though I feel like the story could benefit from a bit more humor or light moments. Still, it’s hard to put down once you start.

The world feels alive, which I really appreciate. Every character has something going on even if it's small. The teacher, Varek, is a favorite of mine. I like how he's more than just a tough guy. One critique is that the pacing could be a bit tighter around chapter 10 or so. It slows down a little after the first major fight.

I wasn’t that invested at first, but once revian fought garron i was all in. the way he reads moves and uses his brain to survive?? Elite. and the twist at the end of that fight?? Chef's kiss. hope the story keeps that level

Okay, this one actually hits. thought it was gonna be cliche af but the whole “worst magic ever” thing got flipped hard. the float power?? kinda sick when you see how he uses it in the garron fight, just wish it got expanded upon more beforehand, but maybe author will later in the story. the internal monologue can drag but it's actually interesting. def gonna keep reading

i thought it was gonna be another edgy op mc with some dumb cheat ability but nah. revian gets DOGGED early on 💀 and still somehow pushes through. the garron fight?? was gas, had a hard time following sometimes tho. pacing kinda drags in the middle when everyone’s just talking and spiraling tho lol. but fr this is better than 99% of the school battle webnovels i’ve read

Not a bad read at all. The characters are fleshed out. The starting is a bit slow but it picks up in chapter 2 and the writing and pacing are all great. The chapters flow well into each other with new concepts every chapter. The power system and world building are easy to understand but still there is alot off mystery behind them. All in all a great book if you love knights, sword fighting and an mc striving on his own power👍

I have read 16 chapters so far and I think it is quite good so far as other reviewers mentioned. Still, I'm not a fan of the world MC lives in to mimic a portion of RL circumstance when teens given super power.

The writing in this novel is pretty good, I can definitely immerse myself within the world while picturing the fights that go on within the current chapters. The characters are also pretty lively, they don't just feel like robots repeating a phrase. It's definitely still early in the novel but I'd say it's a good read. I recommend reading it, hopefully the updates keep up!! Good luck Author, I'll be waiting to see where the story goes.

Story has a lot of action, character depth, and worldbuilding. The author does a great job at immersing the reader through subtle yet effective details. Overall the prose is strong and evocative and it keeps you engaged into what's happening. I wish to see more from this author in the future!