MARVEL: The Force of Riven Thorne

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overall, it's peak entertainment. everything is good and well balanced in its marvel / star wars way. the only thing I hate is the 1.5k work chapters, they are too short, it's like you are watching a movie but 3 scenes of them moving and then 5 lines of dialogue after they stopped the movie for some fuking reason. anyhow my request to the author's 1.5k word limit ain't maximum you can write it's the minimum. plz at the very least do 2.5k words. or else it would take ages to get the story going for the long run. Thank you and this has been a wonderful read so far. keep up the good work.

This deserves a review, even if I'm not great at reviews. This FF is a good one, with a great combination of powers and good use of available stories. The author made this his/her own with some twists and a good insertion of the OC during the OG storyline. None of that "Timeline must stay the course;" it's a brilliant move on the author's side. I urge readers to give this a read, like, and add to their libraries.

it spretty good the only hang up i have is the power consistency he can stop a water tanker thrown at him but struggles to pick up a 90kg man its fine to not want the mc to be too strong but pls reply or atleast explain why thats the case cause it looks bad when someone points it out and you dont reply

A diamond in the rough — Ego

The story is shit and most of the 5 star reviews in the reviews section are clearly fake. So I'm doing my part to bring the total review closer to what it deserve by giving it a 1 star. Though I would be surprised if the author doesn't delete the review.

The story was good until he agreed to work for Nick Fury, and then it turned into trash. The story was good until he agreed to work for Nick Fury, and then it turned into trash.

it turned annoying really fast with all that Nat thing. now i will wait for the author to turn into the dog he is and litter over my review with a dozen comments. the story is not really bad but the author with his personality is such a turn off. any reasonable reviews that doesn't have 5 stars get flooded by comment of him being unable to take any kind of criticism be it reasonable or not.

I rarely write reviews, but this fanfic is actually really good and fun to read, especially the mc, he's a fun guy

I wouldn't give this a five stars, mainly because I dislike the protagonist's constant contradictory comments at the start and also his behavior of stealing shit when honestly, there's too many ways of going about the issue of lack of money with his set of abilities. I also don't like some of the cliches going on, especially with Xavier in one part of the story, cause honestly the view that he's some ultra villain or whatever is pure fanon, and what people do to him and Dumbledore is honestly stupid. Hope the author won't go down this route. Beyond that, I like the idea of someone working literally with shield, though I also think his salary is low, but we will see how that goes. Finally, I hope he will stop with the bs about not being a hero and whatever in regards to killing criminals. Really, Shield has no issues with that, and more often than not, they shoot first before asking. He can be a hero and still kill the villains.

I'm giving spoilers The story didn't start badly, it was nice that he discovered his powers and got involved in the MCU Cannon events. Until he got into the serum problem. After that, the progress of the story turns into a 'wish come true' scenario. I wanted to do this, I did it, I wanted to do that, I did it. Another problem is that the tempo, with the serum, goes from event to event, from rush to rush, from strengthening to strengthening. In addition to all this, it turned into a main character who had power poisoning at the age of 18(?). I stopped reading the paragraphs completely in the 25-29th chapters of the story, when I saw the interesting names, I saw the dialogues and said next next as if I were pressing skip. If the story continues at this pace, the main character will be able to create his own universe in the 50th chapter, I hope it turns into adventures where he goes to different universe versions, because his own universe has become boring.

Haven't read it yet writing review just because of the synopsis, first of all "If you want wish fulfillment and instant satisfaction go to McDonalds" hilarious, second of all my pick for love interest so you can ignore my suggestion is the Ancient One just so he can walk around and get all the other sorcerers to call him "Step-Ancient One" or "Little Sorcerer Supreme" thank you for listening to my TED Talk.

It's a blessing and a curse that I found the FF, it's a great read i just wish it had 100+ chapters when I found it, not only 30.

Im waiting for the new chapters. This is really good, read it. .