Overlord: The Strongest Player

ai op crack fic with so much infodumps and horrible pacing. also character assasination with the way mc has potrayed himself but then ends up in bed with someone whos wary of him.

Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. don't waste your time on this trash.

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After 3 chapter, I can confidently say the autor didn't read 1 chapter of Overlord. There is a big confusion in how work overall level, job level, increase in stat and skill point. How can you write a fanfiction on a work you don't know ? The inconsistancy and plot hole will show up extremely fast.

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why is there so much info dumps . . . .

I think the problem is that even if the main character is a villain, they have to be likable. You can do that in a million ways, over serious honor type, gleeful but principled manic type, there’s really a million and one ways to make a likable villain. Even this charater, which is not likable, would be fine if the world reacted to their unlikability is a realistic way. They don’t have to lose, though that would be 100x more interesting, but they do have to have material or social consequences if you don’t want people dropping after chapter 5

The main character is garbage. I’ve seen stories ruined by sudden personality changes in the protagonist, and this is one of them. At first, you don’t expect it, but then out of nowhere he sleeps with Rigrit, abandons her with a child, and continues doing the same with many other women. It’s a 180-degree turn in the worst possible way. It could’ve been fine if we had been warned from the start, but the MC is just disgusting.

I’m at 11 and so far mc isn’t the strongest he’s a dead beat doesn’t really bring anything to the story as much as a character but if you want overlord with little jjk you can read this but it’s not recommended for those who actually want to see a good story with plot as a fic I gave up after 10 just say ainz in 11……I can at least say you where trying but not everyone can right shit character right we got many story with strong dead beat n we like them this was just not worth the read tbh

Honestly I'm sick and tired of your Sh*t Itachi1010, I have been reading your fics for Years and none your fanfic ever rech 100 ch mark, have you ever Complete a Single Fanfic man at least complete a single Fanfic before moving to the next one man I'm Done 🤦‍♂️

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Just another piece of shit, were the MC is a garbege

thank you author san, you made a fic so bad it's re-ignited my passion to write fanfics again.