DxD : Actually Satan..?

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i have read up to the latest chapter, the author seems to have good charachter development so far and its an enjoyable read

Leo is much more "human" than he once was in the first fic. The beginning was much better, also, we get to see more of leo as a person, unlike the previous work the beginning of this one focuses more on introducing and telling us about leo, increasing the backstory in him.

It is quite literally still a chat group... Nothing wrong with that but dont just sit there and play semantics. I overall like this newer direction the story is heading in compared to the last one but its still just a chat group. If you dont agree with that there are a million other chat group stories where the MC has the power to manually invite who he wants still labeled as a chat group story.

I agree with another comment that says Leo is more human, and I also like that they gave the family and Ronan a better background. For now this is my opinion, I hope it stays that way.

I like the book but it's way too serious and all over the place it's like I almost had to stop myself from hitting something when I was reading it

I’m glad you did a rewrite of this fanfic this is a 100 times better than the original one.

Actually pretty amazing, author seems super smart and that makes it enjoyable, it reminds me of a weird fan fiction I read recently where a guy had warhammer psyker powers in steven universe. Anyways both have pretty smart authors I really enjoy the bug brain moments and the talks about the layers of reality etc. So check it out!

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i like how the story is going so far although the beginning feels like it progressed WAY too fast for my liking but i can't wait for more chapters to release

I guess I didn't read the old one but I really liked the new one. I would like MC to keep her personality as the main template. While 80% of the time in daily life he becomes a regular person, in serious situations he can turn into a devil with godly powers. I loved this and thanks for this fanfic keep writing at your own pace!

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While it's interesting, my only request, considering you went the multiverse route anyway, is to use a ‘Chat Group’ no matter how you change it or call it something like In DC/Young Justice with the Omnitrix/Ultimatrix and a Chat Group by Samael_Son_of_Dawn. I mean don't say you know about their worlds, or at least that they're fictional, but just say you're the chosen one to save their world/multiverse or something, and you got the knowledge from the world as a servant from Fate.

So far it's a big improvement over the original. Still early days with only a few chapters but it's just nice to see a lot more character development than before. it's also just really nice to see that while it's going to be a multiverse novel there is more effort being put into the main world (DxD) at the start before jumping off and getting involved in other worlds. It is very quickly becoming one of the few novels that I actually get excited for when I see a new chapter has been posted.

I don't understand why the author is a professional comedian in my head, and at the same time a university graduate in philology and medicine. Maybe the author seems a little crazy. It doesn't matter, it's a great work :)