Becoming Enkidu in DxD

cant speak for anyone else but stop writing the sound effects of what is happening, it breaks immersion to read a skrrritch in the middle of a fight and secondly dont write the names of the character when they say something it also break immersion, for example: stay behind senpai (koneko) ok (akira) don't do that, you can look at other fictions to understand what people usually do when they want their readers to understand who is saying the sentence

This story is a disappointment. The beginning was okay. MC stayed independent and didnt join any faction, which was a huge plus but his power was nerfed for some odd reason as he should be on par with the Satans from the beginning or possibly even Ultimate class at the least. He has the chains of heaven he should be OP. No, what killed the story was that the MC caught an illness called Peng clan flu. This disease ravaged the MC mind and turned him into a Young Master. As a Young Master no one can have all the beauties, wealth, power, cheats,etc... Even if the young master doesn't need or want them, no one can have them as all belongs to the young master.

pretty good quality, but i dont really know why you gave him the boosted gear. should have just scaled up enkidu's template or something, diversifying his powers just makes it less interesting imo. its like reading a one piece fanfic where the mc can eat unlimited devil fruits, its something that makes you sigh and think "why?".

I have been looking for this translation Thanks for uploading it

Yes, because this is the novel I uploaded, I gave it five stars without hesitation. Dear readers, I'm sorry if there are a lot of mistakes. _____________________________

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The story is not bad, the writing quality needs some adjustment, but overall still good. What I dislike is that most of the chapters are short, and the author mostly promotes his patreon. Like, in a chapter's storytelling is 3/4 while the other 1/4 is promoting his patreon, sometimes it even felt like the promoting part is 1/3 of a chapter

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This novel is pretty good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter of this novel. ---------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------------------------------

Overall a good story but it annoys me that the translator didn't give credit to the original author expect for their name which does absolutely nothing cause so many Chinese authors have similar names **************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************