Repeating rebirth system

It's very interesting, I just stumbled upon it and i hope it's interesting

Just stumbled upon a great book, although it still needs some polishing, yet it's still nice, it had an amazing world building and narrative, recommended for OP protagonist novel readers, keep writing author and don't drop.

good setting and somehow your first paragraph did manage to grab my attention. which is crucial for the first 3 chapters of a book, especially in the first paragraphs. the reason why I got interested in the premise is because reborn , death cycle. those types of premise are great for foreshadowing, back flashing and world building so your plot is a big thumbs up to me. just ramp up your chapters to quickly create the other lores of your story.

Great story... The concept is definitely interesting and eye-catching and it holds a lot of potential. It's written with great details though it could still be improved. Keep writing and upload more chapters.

Gotta say, didn't think reading a first POV book would be this interesting. I'm lovin' it, makes me feel like the protagonist. Also I like the protagonist and story theme. Their not bad honestly, think I'll keep reading for awhile more.

The story is interesting as well as the main character, the plot has many ways to go, wonder what will happen next, will continue to read, lets go.

I just finished reading your novel, and I’m completely SPEECHLESS! From the first page to the last, it was an unforgettable journey. Your characters felt like real people — I laughed with them, cried with them, and couldn’t sleep thinking about their choices. The world you built is so vivid, it’s like I’ve lived there myself. And that ending? PERFECTION! 👏 You’re not just a writer, you’re a magician with words. Thank you for this masterpiece. I’m now your biggest fan!

A really nice read. Please keep update. I just hope that there is more detailed. Like this MC what he looked like. And the reincarntion can be keep more spread so we know more deep about him

The story would be great if its written correctly. Theres a lot of typos and the grammar structure of the paragraph are kinda off. Author must review before releasing a chapter, check for any errors. But all in all, the pacing of the story is good, if its written correctly ill definitely tuned in

Rebirth system? I love the concept, looking forward to the plot development. He intends to remove the system and still has so many lives. Well, all I can say is good luck to Shio. Hooked already, so please keep updating the chapters.

Awesome work. Can't wait to see how it turns out.

Good read I'm hoping you update consistently!!!!

Nice concept of power to rebirth infinitely. The MC is overpowered and cruel. Cannot wait how he want to remove his power[img=recommend]

The story has so much potential the writing is good the pacing is good. Can’t wait for more