Mercenary in Star Wars
Kael Solaris was just a Star Wars superfan — until a divine mistake ended his life and gave him a second chance. Reborn into the Star Wars galaxy as an Elarian, a long-lived and Force-sensitive race of stunning beauty and immense potential, Kael awakens in the deserts of Tatooine in 32 BBY — just before the rise of Anakin Skywalker.
Armed with Revan’s abilities, untraceable by even the most powerful Jedi and Sith, and guided by a mysterious digital system known as MercNet, Kael chooses a path few dare to tread: mercenary commander, free agent, and galactic disruptor. He’ll grow by completing missions, acquiring skills, summoning loyal warriors from across the multiverse — including Halo, Star Trek, and beyond — and forging a new future for the galaxy, one bounty at a time.
But destiny has other plans. With Padmé Amidala and Ahsoka Tano drawn to his orbit, the battle between light and dark will never be the same. As the Clone Wars loom and the Empire’s shadow rises, Kael won’t just watch history unfold — he’ll rewrite it.
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STAR WARS FANFIC
WILL BE LONG, 100+ chapters, 2 love interests, will end at the end of the Ashoka series
Open to any advice, but already have everything planned out.
Remember, I can't please everyone, but please enjoy, comment, review, and share! :)
WHY THOSE THE MC SUMMON WARHAMMER CHARACTERS...LIKE THE PEOPLE THAT CREATED WARHAMMER TECHNOLOGY OF THE GOD OF TECHNOLOGY GOD OF WARHAMMER...THE MC CREATED WARHAMMER WORLD OF TECHNOLOGY OR SUMMON CHARACTERS FROM THE GAME MASS EFFECT, LIKE THE GETHS OR ASARI FEMALE RACE.
author summons her to the STAR WARS UNIVERSE from THE MASS EFFECT UNIVERSE, the most powerful ASARI female......code named SAMARA..SAMARA IS ONE BADAZZ ASARI BOMB SHELL
WHY THOSE THE MC SUMMON UNICORNS OR PRIMUS FROM TRANSFORMERS..PRIMUS HE CREATED ARMY TRANSFORMERS OR UNICRON A MOVING WORLD THAT EATS PLANETS...HE WILL HAVE A WORLD OF TECHNOLOGY AND NO ONE CAN FIND.
You were doing a fantastic job. Keep the chapters coming.👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Reveal Spoiler
first off, this is an AI generated story, which isn't a bad thing. AI can be tricky to use for stories. First they don't member content such as when quigon and pads showed up the story stated the came in starfighters and the leave in pads royal ship, later when voros made a comment about Star wars, she's a native so she wouldn't know. so you need to really proofread them. the dialog gets really choppy as stories progress, and the mc ends up sounding like he just speaks in one-liners, but the additional characters have actual sentences that we are seeing. makes the mc look like his dialog needs to be fleshed out. I have no idea why they do it, though. so far, it's a good read besides the few things I listed. also, why doesn't he kill anyone instead of just knocking them out. that never ends well.
writing is either ai or intentionally cringe. like the premise but really torn down by the actual writing. you ask for remains 0owerd and skills then fear maul?