Erethna: Edges of Existence
“In a world where gods go silent and monsters whisper in the dark… one forgotten name begins to echo again.”
After falling through the cracks of reality itself, a man wakes up in chains — nameless, powerless, and lost.
They call him Antares.
But even he doesn’t know if that name is truly his.
With no memories and no allies, he is thrust into a world of arcane empires, warring noble houses, and hidden forces that shape destiny from behind closed doors. Here, strength is law, and weakness is an invitation to vanish.
From the secrets of ancient churches to the twisted ambitions of inhuman rulers, a storm is gathering — and Antares may be the eye at its center… or the spark that sets the world ablaze.
Erethna: Edges of Existence is a grand dark fantasy saga — rich with metaphysical mystery, brutal politics, and a deeply structured universe where every action has a cost, and every name carries weight.
This is not a tale of heroes.
This is a world where the line between savior and monster is paper-thin.
After reading this work, I have to say, I was surprised. The chapters themselves are written in a good literary style. But what I liked most was the final chapter, or rather, the encyclopedia. You’ve added a lot of information about the worlds, and I hope you’ll be able to develop it all well in the future.
So far, the plot is moving smoothly, but I get that these are the first chapters, and they’re meant to immerse the reader in the world. I think there’s a great foundation for the future—I hope you succeed with it.