A world where everyone believes in fate. Kaxs Nobles doesn't. For her, this world is just a sh*tty place. Here come's the guy from the future. What is his role in Kaxs life? Find out.
First off I love the cover. Although there are a couple of grammar mistakes, I enjoyed reading this. Maybe looking for more from this author.
7 years ago
3
LunaRANaway
Oh my god. Too many grammar mistakes. It's too awkward to read past even a few sentences. Maybe find a editor or proof reader to help you with that.
7 years ago
2
MajesticAura
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7 years ago
2
Reversion
the picture looks good and the summary seems nice but the first turn off that most readers will have is the grammar which is evident near the end of the summary is bad happened? especially in a romance novel where flow is the most important part of the whole experiance
7 years ago
1
AngelLi_8
It has a nice storyline and I personally enjoyed reading it. The plot is original, and the characters have deep peronailties or backgrounds. Good luck and keep writing!
7 years ago
1
pmmt18
So far loving it!! Keep up with the good! Hope you’ll upload more chapters later on!! So far the story is very interesting! I’ll be waiting for more
7 years ago
1
liu_lena
Hmmmmm this story doesn't really capture and draw the reader in that well... It's kinda cringe especially with weird word choice :<
Just my opinion though!
First off I love the cover. Although there are a couple of grammar mistakes, I enjoyed reading this. Maybe looking for more from this author.
Oh my god. Too many grammar mistakes. It's too awkward to read past even a few sentences. Maybe find a editor or proof reader to help you with that.
Reveal Spoiler
the picture looks good and the summary seems nice but the first turn off that most readers will have is the grammar which is evident near the end of the summary is bad happened? especially in a romance novel where flow is the most important part of the whole experiance
It has a nice storyline and I personally enjoyed reading it. The plot is original, and the characters have deep peronailties or backgrounds. Good luck and keep writing!
So far loving it!! Keep up with the good! Hope you’ll upload more chapters later on!! So far the story is very interesting! I’ll be waiting for more
Hmmmmm this story doesn't really capture and draw the reader in that well... It's kinda cringe especially with weird word choice :< Just my opinion though!