He who was a normal mortal abandoned by his own race will have another chance to live will he become a generous ruler that will be beloved by his subjects or will he become a terrifying ruler that makes his enemies shudder with the mention of his name
Hey guys this is a novel I've been thinking about writing for a long time so I will release chapters when I have time please support me by reviewing the novel and giving power stones thank you
So far so good but it would be better if the grammar would be more correct, making it easier to read. I like the plot of the story has alot of potential and good luck with your novel. Hope you become successful!
The story is good and all but you must always check your grammar and see if the words make sense or correct so you dont get bad reviews about your grammar but hey I think your doing well with it your grammar its not but 8/10 👍. Even though I'm writing a bad reviews about your grammar I'm sorry 😅. And I hope to have more chapters, like I just read both of the pages in 20 mins like I'm bored now. 2 chapters isn't enough to satisfy me so I need more chapters but don't rush it though you can take your time ok. And that's my review lol. 😂
This is a really good start to the story and if you could improve the grammar even a little bit it would become exponentaly better. Keep up the good work
sorry guys but I have my exams in the coming month and my sisters marriage in another so I won't be free for some time but I will try my best to find chances to write it I hope you understand
you have done good so far dont disappoint us pls...................................................................................................................i needed 140 characters
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