Tears Of The Undead Azure Knights

It's a good story but the pace is TOO FAST!? Like, "Wait what? What happened again?" There's no time for readers to digest what's happening and the characters lack reaction (e.g. When the co-worker saw his new car or when the boss got pointed a gun and blackmailed) Also, you have a lot of mistakes with a & an, now & know as well as to & too... It would be great if you could separate the conversation into different paragraphs: I said, "...." My boss, "..." exclaimed. Something like that... I hope this helps your group... -from Originals Author Society

I like overpowered reincarnation stories, but this one would just make you speechless. For example, the MC has a 36 million debt to pay, yet decides to buy even more stuff. His company (which he recently became the head of but hasn't even stepped into his office) made around 870million Yuan in a year, and like 840 million is for company expenses, while 36 million is the amount the head can personally use. Remember, THIS IS IN A YEAR, yet the MC hasn't even being working as the head for a normal 9 to 5 day. But probably the most probomatic thing about this novel is, that it progresses so damn fast to the point that you're wondering if the author actually knows the procedures that are supposed to be done by the MC. Not much world building, mostly about the game and the company. The MC's luck in the game is also more BS than novels like Shura's Wrath and Evil Dragon against the heaven, which are known for the BS luck their MC's have.

Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing

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