Limitless Dream System: Primordial Creation

Shameless to rate my own novel. This is an rewrite of my first as it was not that good so I rewrote it. I hope that all the readers will enjoy my novel. I will probably just post whenever I feel like it with forgetting the count of number of chapters per week sometimes, so I may go over, but I promise you I will never go under unless something happens. But like I said read my novel and give me a chance as this is still 'technically' my first novel, and give me your power stones. PS some characters do not belong to me so do not copyright me as I like other animes, novels, games, and etc and will incorporate into my novel.

A very good story it starts off slow with alright or below average writing quality, but later on it gets better and better. The story is info dumb when he starts cultivating, but is still good.

Grammar should be worked on. There isn't really and world development. The conversations are very awkward. It's just a weird novel. .................................................................................................................................................

a good novel for me 👍🏻😁👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Keep it up and pls release more chapters its an intersting story with some good stuff to look for in the next updates. Cant wait till he go clback and **** his family and the empror

The Story is really orginal. I havent read anything like that before. The story is mixed of many other novels, systems and cultivations storys. It is fun read.

super recommended one of my favorite fanficks -------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Love this novel just like the other as long you get past the grammar errors the it would be a good read. The author needs an editor as you can see in some chapters his grammar is top notch then other its subpar.

Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😎

looking forward to it ............................................................................................................................................................................................................... waiting for more chapters

I gave it a chance, but its just a bazillion info dumps and excessive random golden spoon power ups sprinked with bad *** scenes. No meaningful plot in 100+ chapters and the characters all kinda suck. Very meh, there are way better novels out there.

very good story , likeable characters and most important an MC that gets lucky , only thing missing is for this novel to become a 3d movie series

Novel is good, but grammer is kind of off. But it is mostly because of the author giving us lots of chapters per day causing his grammar to go down, but it needs to be fixed other than that it is good.