VR World of Cultivation

As the writer of the book I will of course give myself a five star review :P. Anyways i hope that you guys enjoy the novel please leave me any constructive criticism or nonconstructive I can take it. Have fun reading my novel and remember i hold all the spoilers he he.

I like it for now... its different from other vr novels its a interesting idea hope you keep it up with the updates and dont drop it btw i didn't read the whole novel just read the 1 chapter.. but for just the idea of a vr game that you can cultivate you get 5 stars from me.

Love it! I like this sort of novel the best so I hope you can continue to write it at comfortable pace and not burn yourself out. I like the mix of different fantasy elements too keeps it fresh.

Great story, great writing, great originality, great characters, great development... Basically great everything. The only flaw - then only thing I'm unhappy about - the only thing that's not great (lol), is the lack of release schedule... Don't get me wrong, I would love it if 2-10 chapters were released every day... that would be great! BUT, I understand that the author has a life. And I understand that the reason the writing and everything is so good, is because the author takes their time to write it rather than forcing themselves to crank out a chapter every day - So I can live with there being a fair while between releases. BUT, I wish there was a schedule... For example, releasing a chapter every month on a set day (though two per month would be better!)... It's just that without a schedule and with so long between releases, I check for a new release every day... Often multiple times per day (pathetic, I know, but I really love this story!) And I spend the whole time worrying it's been dropped! :'( But if there were a schedule, I wouldn't get my hopes up every day and I wouldn't have to worry about it being dropped unless a scheduled release date was missed. So Author, if you're reading this & haven't dropped it (Please don't drop it! But if you have, please let us know so I can stop worrying & hoping!), you should consider a schedule. Thanks for everything. Cheers, Guy.

thank you for your hard work it needs more refining but it is good.............................................................................................

We do have a very interesting story here, going from games to cultivating directly. One of the only issues I found was in the loss of punctuation with run on sentences. Rob is interesting to follow but the character in game names is down right strange at times, for example one of his friends is called nohair as a joke and then it happens that he loses his hair. . . Ok. Very good story overall though and no overpowered or broken people yet. Good read can’t wait for more chapters.

While it is an okay story this book just has too many things wrong with it to be amazing. First is that this book does not do any explaining of the setting or give the characters backgrounds. While I know this is a common thing on this site but there are just a lot of grammar mistakes in it too. The story just progresses too fast it doesn't stay on a topic it just goes through story lines extremely fast. Would not recommend.

Heck yeah this novel is a little rough but in a good way I see that it has a lot of potential and I can see this going a lot of different ways but I hope the author does not go the (evil sect name but good actually path) <these kinds of story’s die off early or become reparative. But, maybe the author will surprise us! I can’t wait 😊

I can recommend this novel to everyone who likes VRMMORPG's. I really like the concept of your novel. The links between the cultivation world and the game are very interesting. Keep up the good work!

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I like the novel, but I need a table with character names associated with player names. I have always been bad with names. If you can also work in associations within each chapter that would be great for me!

Love the story and the characters. I almost didn't read due to a lack of rating. I am reviewing to hopefully get a rating for the the story and draw in more readers.

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