she lost her precious first night, when she just reborn.
she is the master of pen and sword
some people say that is she almighty?
who knows what happened to her? If she didn't work hard. she had to give birth to someone else.
when this deal can finally end, why he doesn't allow her to leave, why he let her stay on the bed everyday.
I don’t think I can read this anymore- I have OCD with the English language and grammar... IM FROM ENGLAND GADDAMNIT, I really can’t help it. Especially as someone who majors in English. But the story was at least somewhat interesting. Somewhat.
All in all great novel but really takes 10 stones for 1 chapter? I may not able to continue it all cahapters cost 10 when other novel only 3 max 5 stones per chapter...please do reconsider thanks
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i can't truly say what i want to say because im not good at english.......but for me the story is interesting👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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The story is so far interesting and well thought out but due to the grammar errors the reading flow is disturbed. Those errors also make the conversations a little awkward and I personally stop at every other error to correct it in my mind. I think it would be good chouce to find somebody/ an editor who can correct some of them before the new updates. It is one of the best original stories I have found so far but sadly not one of the best reads.
This novel is just awesome!!! So good it’s even inspired me to write my first review ever! Finished reading all 56 chapters in one go, nonstop! It’s so addicting. Can’t wait to read more! Even so, there are some grammar mistakes, it’s easy to understand, what author meant to write. Strongly recommend it 🎉
Author i love your novel Its amazing.......totally great But the grammar makes it hard to read No offense If you need an editor...you can contact me Cause I really love your book I just hope you accept my help ................ .......................
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i really enjoy reading this novel 😍😍😍 i love this type of story and the plot,,it is really my cup of tea☕☕☕ my dear author, thank you for sharing with us this beautiful and interesting novel 😘😘😘 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸
Author I hope that you are fine and I will wait for the updates plz plz plz come back soon 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
I really didn't like a his series usually wouldn't write a review hear but need the measly do giving lol. Sorry for not giving good review but not very good.
The story seems interesting but am confused. Can the author explain what auxiliary chapters are? Where do I start reading from? Should I start from chapter 1 or the auxiliary chapters. I am really confused
There was some good love drama. The male lead is somewhat rude and overly possessive, but it's not a hopeless case, I feel that love will change him into a better person. Although, he's not perfect from the start, he is not over the top like some other male leads, at least he's bearable, and his imperfections even make things more spicy (know what "spicy chicken" means, LOL? =) But I mean "spicy" in the good sense - interesting flavor). The female lead is a strong OP character with system cheats. Also there are some nice friends from the male's side and pretty funny interactions with green tea sister villainess.