Greater Than Gods: Chojusen Akimichi [Complete: I'm On The Job Editting~ This Is What I'm Suppose To Write, Right?]

Greater Than Gods: Chojusen Akimichi [Complete: I'm On The Job Editting~ This Is What I'm Suppose To Write, Right?]

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Author: BrightDawn
3.98
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Naruto, but Naruto isn't the MC, Its Choji's twin brother that has a system.



As much as I wish for Chojusen to be a space-trotting gopnik, we probably won’t ever see that come to fruition. This is the closest I can come to photoshopping an image that resembles Chojusen. He’s supposed to have parted hair like a comb-over. But, aside from that, the image is pretty much ok.



Sources for the novel cover (I Photoshopped the images together, but this is where I got them before it was edited~):



http://www.kinyu-z.net/WDF-1566448.html



https://www.deviantart.com/torivic/art/Gopnik-Slav-Ishida-734359751



https://i.pinimg.com/originals/f1/6c/01/f16c015d6865695689833f76f70be901.jpg



http://ninrp.wikia.com/wiki/Akimichi_Clan

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ChrolloDancho
ChrolloDancho

I'm sorry but this isn't Naruto... MC help Kushina and Minato to survive nine tails attack when he wasn't even 1... If you want to make your MC OP at least make him grow, an baby MC OP should not exist. And your system is too ridiculous, it isn't fun to read a story where the MC is a walking cheat like this. And the last thing I have to say is that when I read a Naruto Fanfiction I expect to see power that come from that world not some overly cheated power that could be on random chinese xianxia.

6 years ago
70
HDDreyar
HDDreyar

Well the start of the story was great, I guess until he put a limiter on the mc and the encounter with danzo, well let's just say that it "killed the mood" of the story. Its not even an overpowered mc as he has a limiter and! HE DOESN'T EVEN FIGHT!!!!!!! The fight scenes last for more or less HALF a chapter. Its quite boring honestly.

6 years ago
20
_EMI_
_EMI_

Chapter 21 was the last chapter I read. This novel had a lot of potential and I was very impressed by all the original ideas, but then author made M.C. too overpowered and he began to get 'scared' of his own power. M.C even bought something from system that restrains his powers. Not to mention the fact that M.C is acting like a typical japanese protagonist - Sissy* and n*aive. I gave up on this novel. And with that, I change my ratings to the minimum.

6 years ago
19
anger
anger

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6 years ago
19
Crow_OF_Judgement
Crow_OF_Judgement

Read till chapter 71. Here is the review. Writing quality: nice Character: cliche mc who would do anything for the person they slightly bond with. Story Development: Ok How I feel about the novel: Not good for me. Mc's that help anyone and everyone that they bond with is very annoying. The main character just acts like the typical Japanese anime main character with just being a little more merciless.

6 years ago
14
Reimoss
Reimoss

I hope this is good. After novels about Inuzuka and Hyuga, I was expecting something like this. . . . . . I still do not know why I need 140 characters to be able to post this.

6 years ago
11
Dumbgum
Dumbgum

Stupid fucking limiter my ass. Its a good story until that part. If you dont want your mc too be OP just let him climb his way from bottom to top.

5 years ago
8
Sven123
Sven123

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6 years ago
8
AldiXanana
AldiXanana

so far so good and the idea of the mc is born as the brother of chouji is pretty interesting i hope the author will release more chapter and can improve his writing style, also please release more chapter in the future and dont make the mc op to fast it will ruin your story later and becareful towards the harem route if u will add it later cause it will be sad if another good potential novel ruin because of the opness and haremm

6 years ago
6
Mike_Lu
Mike_Lu

The plot is full of holes. The writing is not as bad as other fanfic here but some logic is very pathetic. Not to mention the fact the formatting is horrendous

6 years ago
4
HyperChilliMan
HyperChilliMan

Pure trash, dont bother reading if u cant stand bad storytelling. I got angry after reading the first 2 chapters. I give this a big fat 000000000000000000000000000000000000.

6 years ago
4
CrimsonDarkLord
CrimsonDarkLord

Not my cup of tea. The is a big pussy and the author makes the mc Overpowered and now his nerf with for some Stupid bullsHitt. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎.

6 years ago
3
Hito
Hito

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6 years ago
3
Darkviga
Darkviga

ok id just like to start off by saying yes i know this is novel is 2 years old but id like to write this review anyways for the people who are thinking of reading this so they know what they are getting into. firstly the mc is op maybe a little too op actually what am i saying this dude is so overpowered its annoying with the whole like limiter and how because he has this limiter know everythings gonna go super sanic and go 100x faster because "your using your abilitys at their max" secondly its a harem... do i need to say anything else i have read so many of these shitty harem fan-fics and while im not saying the novel is shitty so dont get me wrong there im trying to say the whole harem thing is shitty i dont wanna read like some r-18 shit on how these teenagers are having *** and how compared to the other girls "kaguya is more challenging" id like to say even though how i have talked about this may make this novel seems alot worse but we all have our own opinions i personally did not like this but i encourage you to atleast read a few chapters just to get a feel for it.

4 years ago
2
InfernalRhage
InfernalRhage

This novel is currently one of my favorite original novels on the site. The writing quality it amazing compared to most of what you find on here. You may find a few mistakes but after they are pointed out it is usually corrected quickly. As far as updates go there are normally at least one a day and here lately its been multiple everyday, which is awesome seeing as some only update once a week if your lucky. I knocked off a star on character design and two on world background. As for why I will explain and yea i know there are a lot of people out there who are going to want to ***** about my reasoning and I honestly could care less. I knocked off a point on character design due to the fact that there are less than a handful of actual original characters in the novel. The ones that are there are all well developed. While some my complain about the MCs personalitly that is a personal opinion and does not change the fact that he is a fully developed character. The missing star is mainly due to the fact that the majority of the people who appear in the story are not original characters therefor the author can not be credited with their design or development. Yes I get it is a fan fiction but it doesn't change the fact that those characters are not the authors original creations. That brings me into the next area world background. Once again I knocked off two stars due to this being a fan fiction. Why does that matter? While most don't seem to care I can not bring myself to give a full five stars when the world/worlds in this story were created by someone else. While some may complain I am nitpicking I honestly feel I have given an honest review on a novel I greatly enjoy. It is a great story that I plan to continue following. Good job mr/mrs author keep up the great work!!!

6 years ago
2