DROPPED:Juvenile Entertainer
Warning: Harem, system, slow-paced, CRINGE and system with a bad personality.
This has been dropped. This is my first novel which had a lot of problems from the pacing, power scale and grammar. Read knowing that it has no end.
To be a star is a simple Idea but to turn a boy that's been secluded from Society into one is much more difficult. Even if you took on his body you still felt his anxiety, insecurity and more. It's slow but worth it.
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Authors Note: The novel you are about read contains strong language and some vivid sexual content
The Mc is beta at the start as he is a character that suffers from anxiety due to his upbringing. Although it did take 23 chapters for the Mc to show visible growth that's just due to my naturally slow pacing.
Don't expect too much, especially since this is my first time writing a novel. It's also best not to take seriously as I am just writing for fun and to just something to do on my downtime
This novel will share a lot of similarities to other novels that I particularly love and mostly because I lack originality but it will be in my style.
UPLOAD SCHEDULE
Tuesday, Wednesday and Saturday
HELLO this is the Author I finally wrote enough chapters to do self review and all I can say is that this will NOT be dropped but will progressively get more exciting as time passes and I'm excited to show my weird imagination.
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It's good but you don't post anymore please dont stop ....... . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . .. .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. .. .. . . . .. .. . . .
Writing quality 4/5. nothing to complain. updates 4/5: good release rate. story:3/5 Lets be honest, he is "compared" to the last two that "had" this system pursues materialistic gain and fame. Two of the worst traits of humanity: vanity and greed. so this is a sold 2/5. Also the cliches, the unreal behavior of people and so on. Character: I am biased, one of the things I hate the most is the cliche power\system with its own ego, and this novel the system has a very very ugly and annoying ego, at certain points you just want the "system" to go and die. ontop of that is the failure penalty for missions (spoiler: donate 100k $, or what ever currency it uses, or be registered as a *** offender, yes this came out of no where. Do this **** in a week or loose your hair, so on and so one), this just shows poor humor at best and laziness on part of the author, instead of coming up with original story to light fire under the MC or at the very least think of a proper failure penalty (reward: +2 strength, failure: -2 charisma, etc). MC: To be fair I am at chapter 23 but MC is a spinless yes man. Past 3 chapters we already encountered several situation he was forced to do something he didnt want or feel comfortable with only because the person pushing him has tits (aka his mistress or so it seems). To be honest, most of the time his goal if wanting to be a Star, what ever that means doesn't really seem like something he wants, at least not with that personality: he is shy, does not like crowds, private and so on. World: 2/5 duh, its earth so nothing much is original yet. I will keep reading any may even update this novel but up to here its nothing much. The author would do better to concentrate on his newer novel marvel father something. The worst thing about a novel is when the MC is average at best and you feel he does not deserve what he has.
Really enjoying this. Only wish there were more stories like this one. Keep up the good work. Thanks author XD ..........................................................................................................................................
Thk for updating. Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
The novel is all around very good, the author's writing skills are top-notch if you're considering the level at which most writers on webnovel write like. The only thing that could be negative about this novel is the stability of updates. The novel either way is very entertaining and unique in its own way.
Loved this story cant wait for more chapters. I loved the kind mc and how he wasnt racist like anouther certin showbiz novel. While the system at first was kind of annoying but as the story goes on everything improved 10 fold. Good work keep it going
Love the story so much. Kind of dislike the system but oh well and its personality has gotten better so it's fine I guess. The only reason I'm not giving it a 5 is because updates aren't as frequent anymore.
This has a nice MC that can be said "OP". He god damn perfect and has some flaws though and it just makes him more human. Some how thinking he would lean twards being a star but with his skill from latest chapter... He could moon light as a vigilante with his Ai... He clinches victory by what he does and I enjoyed how he gets the people he loves. Great stuff!
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This story really looks to be a very interesting story I think I just might end up liking it very much just by reading the reviews and summary. It’s definitely a story I will read for sure from start to finish! I wonder which characters I will end up hating and loving.😜 I’ll give it a high rating for now😋😋 Great job translating or writing the story!!
Well guys, what is a amazing novel with good MC who keeping improving?? This!! Author really makes a awesome job there. Thank you. I wanna moar and really nice job with the fluffy angels. Thank you, again. You make my day. 👊❤
very good, thanks !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊---------...................................😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊