Dungeon Apocalypse: Earth violates the rules.
The world has changed, the appearance of strange and terrible monsters, super humans, dungeons, evolved animals, and mythological creatures, drive the world to brink of extinction.
Alan is only a subordinate of an ordinary dungeon master in this apocalyptic world. His greatest achievement was becoming a part of the 1000 strongest dungeon attackers. But it was still not enough, and in the end he died after being devoured by monsters.
When he opened his eyes again, he was shocked to discover that he had returned to his world 27 years in the past, the fateful day before the beginning of the apocalypse.
With his future knowledge, what will he do? Find holy artifacts? Look for hidden treasures? Become the best swordsman? No even with all that, it still wouldn't be enough.
Using his knowledge of the future he will strive to be the best farmer.
The best DUNGEON Farmer.
(Fixed by Immortal_Potato)
Just disappointing, only the first chapter is good enough to read without losing brain cells. The MC who went back 27 years later is acting like a brain dead spoiled idiotic man.. WTF? How could someone of his caliber become one of the so called top 1000. Simply disappointing... The only chapter readable is the first one, the rest is simply horse ****.
grammar and conjugation are killing this novel. to all who will say 'it's only the first chapter' ok then. let's see the last chapter. chapter 26(named "chapter 24 - effects ") : [Screams of fear were heard from various directions. Some people even vomit when they see scattered limbs.] you see the problem with this line ? yeah he first talks of the situation as if it was past, then present. [scream were heard] and after that [vomit when they see]. you may think well it's ok it's just one or two mistakes it happens, but NO. In EVERY single chapter there's at least 10 up to 20 mistakes like these.... f this even I who isn't English can't read it peacefully because it's disturbing me. f this. waste of time....
It's okay, however the grammar holds it back. Here's my take on (an edited version of) the synopsis. The world has changed, the appearance of strange and terrible monsters, super humans, dungeons, evolved animals, and mythological creatures, drive the world to brink of extinction. Alan is only a subordinate of an ordinary dungeon master in this apocalyptic world. His greatest achievement was becoming a part of the 1000 strongest dungeon attackers. But it was still not enough, and in the end he died after being devoured by monsters. When he opened his eyes again, he was shocked to discover that he had returned to his world 27 years in the past, the fateful day before the beginning of the apocalypse. With his future knowledge, what will he do? Find holy artifacts? Look for hidden treasures? Become the best swordsman? No even with all that, it still wouldn't be enough. Using his knowledge of the future he will strive to be the best farmer. The Best DUNGEON Farmer.
The Quality of writing is good enough, 5 chapters a week will give a fresh daily dosis, the story is 27 years back in time so enough story the MC can exploit for himself, and with this "back in time" there is a ground work done for an interesting End "game" if the story isn`t rushed at the end. High chance to be a really good story for after work ;)
Very interesting story, I will wait for the continuation. :) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Not the worst thing out there, far from it in fact. But grammar is pretty atrocious and I have yet to be drawn into the story or care about any of the characters m.
I like the novel. It has an interesting story. But I needs a translator or an editor. There are a few times where I am wondering what your wrote. But other than that, it’s great! Please write more!
This is my novel, of course I will give 5 stars, the second chance novel is my favorite. Hopefully later I will not get bored writing this novel.
Just like crouching Tiger I expect a good story, I like stories where you’re in a game and plot twist you go back in time just to be op or more stronger than the others, so yeah pretty much It has a good potential and a good ending If the Author’s cards plays right.
The story is mediocre at best. I read over 38 chapters and there is no in depth dungeon building or dungeon attackers. Honestly the idea of dungeons just being a leveling up hub with refreshments is just annoying. Then we got a dungeon core who keeps calling the MC, brother, a MC who has to advertise his dungeon and stupid made up rules that the author creates when describing Gia and her system. Like who would have a tournament match against goblins in the forest and the winner can make a wish of the losing party. Seriously, this isn't even a dungeon story at this point. And the multi-POV switches doesn't help it.
So far in about 10 chaps in. I like the setting and the characters are interesting, although I am somewhat biased just because I like dungeon master stories. However, there are so many grammar errors that I can't bring myself to read anymore until it is edited. Most notably, female characters are constantly being given the wrong pronoun and it just kills the suspension of disbelief.
A dungeon master sort of story with knowledge of the future! Incredible means and incredible items that the MC will or already have attained! Author has made this to be an intresting story of how dodge people can be... thats my point of view. Also will the MC care fore his people greatly or shall he use them as servant?
Haha🤩🤩🤩🤩 😝I am still loving this story ❤️❤️❤️loooovvvve loooovvvveeee 💖💖💖looooooovvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeee🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰so good I like the few chapters I’ve Read and will continue to enjoy reading this 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳keep the chapters coming👍
Pretty good story, and the author has gotten a bit better as each chapter is written. The story has pretty good flow although they have to get better at letting the story give us details on mechanics instead of just dumping it all at once.
Lots of potential but bad grammar, a chaotic, plot and random out of character moments detract from the story. Could be a great story though, with a major rewrite.