Harry Potter and the Girl in Red

A wonderful mix of the HP world with an insert of hard roleplaying and a MC with a pretty unique personality. I blame the author for depriving me of sleep, yeah, couldn't stop reading until the last chapter, gotta be illegal how amazing it is .

Hi there ^^ First review ever that I wrote ! So I'm writing there as I reached chapter 43 and I gotta say the story is really good because : - even if I'm not an English native speaker, I can say that the grammar is definitely good. And if you compare it to the average fanfic, then it is a no brainer this one is a pearl of grammar by comparison ! The sole point that I regret is the lack of separation when there is a time skip. - The characters are super detailed and most importantly the MC and the secondary characters are well fleshed out. The MC can be a bit too strange or overwhelming when you begin reading but she will grow on you real quick as she is badass, sassy and so much more. - The story has got a good rhythm and get you hooked even me as I'm not a Harry Potter fan (and yes that exist :p ). And you will often wonder yourself what will the MC do next or simply enjoy the bashing physical or psychological that she does. ( Poor Severus ! ) So read it and don't be discouraged if you don't understand all that is relevant to the magic of the MC or her background as that will be revealed along the chapters !

I don't understand. Why so few people read this gold? The mc was awesome. The story waa great. I already recommended this book to my friends and the response was good. Hope the author doesn't drop this book.

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Extremely bad and cringe. MC self insert is such a worthless and stupid character. Annoying personality, totally overpowered. Add to that bland and boring writing and you got yourself a real cringefest.

There is so much I want to say about this book, and I feel the need to mention that i dont have the time or memory to remember and write all of it, but this book is one of thr genuinely best fan fictions Ive ever read.

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What an excellent book with a character that was not very easy to understand but left such a big effect on the original characters of the series and just how the story progressed from the beginning to the end is just beautiful. The beginning might make you feel a bit lost but that just clears up as soon as you dive deeper. Probably one of my favourite fanfics and a series that almost makes me cry everytime I think about it

Ok, 5 stars hands down. only 13 chapters and I have found myself adoring the MC and take on Hermione. This is perfect for anybody who likes a system but thinks it’s too much. The system is there, just implied by the genius MC. I’ve read plenty of these Harry Potter fanfics but this is so far my favorite. SerIously underrated.

Omg the book is back!!! I absolutely love this story! I am a bit sad I have to restart from the beginning but oh well. I will read it as soon as this stupid storm passes and my final is done.

I don't know what to say. Writing quality is good. I just keep reading it. So here's your 5 🌟 and hope you don't drop it at a cliff. I hate those kind of writers at least give us some closure anyway love the book is this much words enough to rate it meh😕

first novel here I've seen that includes dnd. Nice-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------