Beyond the World Plan

A very interesting work, the novel is undoubtedly interesting, intriguing. Although there are a couple of points that the author could correct. In particular, the main character uses modern words that do not correspond to the era in which he lives. In general, this novel is dynamic, the world described is not entirely clear ... but probably the author will give an explanation later. In general, I rate the work of the 6 chapters read 4.8 stars. Thanks to the author for his creative thinking and interesting work, he added it to his library. Respect!

Hello my Fellow Fantasy writer! I gave you 5 stars! and I'm glad to help! I'm captivated with your story and in just few chapters, I'm craving for more! Well I do want some editor to help you with your work in writing though...... But it's too early to judge and your story looks promising and has potential

Four chapters aren't enough to leave a proper review but so far, I find the novel promising! The grammar has few errors but nothing that would disinterest the readers!

Pengembangan cerita yang menarik, tapi sayang tidak ada pembaruan bab. Kuharap novel ini bisa diteruskan. Nexttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

Thank you for sharing your story! Please accept this 5-star as an initial review, subject to changes once this novel is complete. To note: I've spotted grammatical errors, especially in your Synopsis. Hopefully you can find the time to edit your work. Please check my work too, and I'm hoping that you could drop a review too. WAR GROUNDS is the title.