An Alternate Story where the Blue Citadel Guild appears in the Holy Roble Kingdom's Territory instead of Re-Estize.
Trying her hand in becoming a Paladin, a choice made under the influence of her admiration for her mother, Neia Baraja has never been that good at maintaining interpersonal relationships. This was mainly because her childhood friends kept their distance from her, thanks to the fierce-looking eyes she inherited from her father.
Finding that she does not have a talent with a sword, and her ranged abilities being of little use, she instead chose to become a Squire. When a massive menacing Fortress appears in front of the wall separating their territory from the Beastman Enclave, she soon finds herself sent with the investigation team to figure out where it came from, and what or even who may inhabit it.
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This novel was a good surprise for me, even while seeing relatively little about it I like it more than the authors previous work (the blue citadel) while the background of the mc make is the fact that he made a mistake, his mistake had a repercussion that actually made his life harsher is something that I really appreciate, in many novels we have mc’s that are flawless but that just made them seem less human in my opinion. The initial location is also something that I really liked, in most overlord fanfics the mc starts in the forest of tob and usually the mc just follow the same steps Momonga followed it doesn’t matter if they are different beings with different aspirations, so I really like this change specially since this place allow for more options, he could wage war against the holy kingdom or become their new deity, there’s also the fact that he is now in the open instead of the shadows so he can’t be as passive as momonga was, overall I think this could potentially be a really good novel
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Absolutely love it. The quality of the writing is fantastic, updates are frequent, the story develops consistently and is not rushed, characters are more or less consistent and is overall fantastic. 5/5 - Definitely recommended. Best work thus far.
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This alteration to overlord is a very pleasant delight to read. This book made me laugh a good amount of times any overlord fan would be pleasantly surprised to read. can’t wait for next releases the only complaint I have is that I can’t celebrate this it doesn’t give me the option to.
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