S-RANK IN ANOTHER WORLD

Just to make it clear to everyone who is coming into this story, neither I, who am the author, liked the beginning of this story, if you're looking to read a good story, in the beginning, don't read it. That was my first story and the beginning is *a m a t e u r* and even I don't like it, so if you care a lot about grammar and some stupid choices, I don't advise you to read it. MY DISCORD: https://discord.gg/P5JynPh

Story is good. But the MC quiet useless. Dumb and stupid decision. Weak for being a former s-class hunter. More like a ****ty hunter. Many forced interaction and filler. Sometimes it pain in the ass to read it. Come 12 yr with 40+ mental age still looking for a date. More like a forced romance. Its like more ****ty to reincarnation a ****ty hunter. But well if you can ignore all the fault u can still enjoy the novel. But for me, sorry it’s not my cup of tea. And sorry for being harsh.

The protagonist is a little dumb, but I really liked the progress of the story. Keep up the good work. ********************************************************************

Very very Dog-**** start the earlier chapters just plainly showed the author just put what he wanted and it was very inconsistent as well, character building yes there is, character design? My answer to that is negative, I mean why design a bloody ass S-ranked reincarnator when his experiences are just plain ****, can't be used. I mean the boy has no determination, no perseverance, no traits whatsoever that should be shown before he was reincarnated with his memories. I mean not just that, the grammar isnt getting any better at all like what the actual F***. The Author says that he is training his writing skills, truth is, he says he is Brazilian and we should forgive him for typos when he gives absolutely no fucks about improving and just says those at the end of the chapter to have an excuse at not correcting his grammar mistakes. He hasn't improved at all and I don't know how people can manage to give this a 5 star I mean full of inconsistencies, grammatical mistakes, hypocrite-like author and worst of all he doesn't even bother improving and just uses excuses.

The grammar definitely needs improvements, and the choices of the characters felt stupid, but that's okay, as long as you actually improve it will be good.

Ok now lemme start off and say I don’t like the mc one bit. Sure the story looks good but when you read it it becomes a ****show. the mc is the most fucking dumbest person I’ve ever read. Like where is this supposed “S rank”? His awareness was so bad he got slashed in the fucking chest by a bandit behind him “he didn’t die somehow” *cough* *cough*plot amour* *cough* cough* why he couldn’t end those bandits was simple awareness? Are you fucking serious,weren’t you supposed to be a S rank in your last life?? but anyway this whole story has little to no potential. I’ve dropped it because I just can’t with this stupid mc. If you still wanna read this story DONT. You will lose your remaining braincells

The first 70 chapters are Soo good. But then there comes the love part and it all goes stoinks. A simple date takes about 4 chapters. Buying clothes = chapter. It just became a slice of life now . His power level is stuck. No level ups, or anything. Pure school thingy, btw the school ark is useless because he didn't learn anything, well besides kissing a lady. Please author, don't forget his power leveling. Its slowly becoming a trash. Any experienced adventurer should focus on leveling up bec he's near death a lot of times because he's weak. But there he is, focusing on girls. Damn. I'm reaaallyy gettin bored.

Ótima história Mano continue assim ✌🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿

This story is a great disappointment ,I expected much more than that . For a person who was hailed as the strongest in his previous life ,the MC sure is dumb . Not to forget to mention the grammatical errors . Editing ,lots and lots of editing , this story needs a hell lot of editing. The plot is interesting but the characters are horribly designed .

Every chapter a deception. Although I'm on chapter 20, I hope it improves fast, if not, I'm dropping it.....................................

This is by far one of if not the worst novel I’ve read... like ever. There’s 2 main points I want to bring to light as many if the readers probably already know. My first point being that the MC is mental. Really not much to say he’s just not the brightest. The main character is supposed to be a top dog S rank adventurer with decades of experience, and there’s nothing to show for this, at least in the chapters I read. He’s supposed to be 45+ years of age but his demeanor is that of a pubescent child and his intelligence is far less. My second point is that as far as I can see the author isn’t so much as lazy about the releases but lazy about grammar and translations. I don’t care that he’s Portuguese, there are many authors on the site that do a way better job at translating and having proper grammar than the author and they don’t even use latin based alphabets. This is no excuse. This goes down to the authors commitment. If he cared more he’d research more or he’d use other things to help him. But he doesn’t and it shows, again as far as I read anyway. So **** this I’m dropping it.

Worst of the worst... congrats for anyone who hasnt read this sh#t The MC has no brain, the author doesnt use a logic in the story. If u insist to read, then... yeah

Don’t read this novel. The author deletes bad reviews. The latest app updates shows you when your reviews are deleted and it’s easy to go into your profile and see who deleted them. Way to go author. I left a legit review about the sh!tty parts of your book and how the MC is a total idiot and not an S-Ranker and how he makes so many stupid low IQ decisions but I guess that hurt your feelings so much that you deleted my review? Nice one. I’ve copied and pasted this review and will just repost it since you have a habit of deleting reviews. Way to play yourself you idiot. We can actually track what books delete reviews lmao. You’re so dumb. Third time he’s deleted the review.

I see the comments in the first three chapters and I don't know what to say. The readers are complaining about grammar most of the time, they forget to see the story itself, the character is that topical brainless muscle headed, for what I can see. The world is average, so as the story development. There's too many things to improve, but the idea is amazing, and the author must persist if he can improve.