Abyssal Lord of the Magi World

Don't be discourage because of lower audience. Most of the reader don't read until it have at least 200 chapters! :) Your time will come soon. KEEP IT UP!

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Better than the story it was based on in my opinion I liked Warlock of the Magus world but I think this stories an improved version and definitely more interesting Good job

Overall, this is your stereotypical 'System' based story where the MC relies on the 'System' as their crutch to develop and grow in power. Nevermind that the MC has reincarnated twice and have reached lofty heights in one of his previous lives. The MC is thoroughly reliant on that crutch instead of using his previous experience to get stronger, the MC is painfully immature to the point that you think he wasn't in any position by a servant in his previous lives. I cannot recommend this story despite so many 'glowing' reviews to it. Most of these reviews are just pandering and toe kissing with lack of any substance on why the story deserves its 5 Stars. You want my input? Here. Character Development : 2/5 Story Grounding : 2/5 World Building : 3/5 Sub-Plot & Arching Plot : 2/5 Conclusion: Worth the read only if you have nothing else to read. Or read if you find the story interesting to you. Seriously, leave actual reviews in Author/WebNovel staff. I am appalled that there is a distinct lack of proper reviews from the masses.

Honestly, the story was doing just great in the beginning, but you had to follow the same casual path. What do you even mean by ruler of death and destruction. This guy can't help himself but help every unfortunate soul he will meet, apparently as long as you have a strong 'Will' you are trustworthy. Really!! .do i have to remind you this a world ruled by magi and magi are known to be selfish and pragmatic beings.

The author is someone who doesn't care to improve his writing quality (grammar). Some readers are kind enough to correct some mistakes in the comment, but the author didn't event tried to change the pointed mistakes. It's normal if your english is bad. It's stupid if you don't even want to improve what you lacks. But the story is good, so if you can bear the grammar, it's worth to try.

Same thIng repeats every 100 chapters. Stale to almost non existant story building and has the same bs of I return my favors x100 and hate my enimes x100 young master slapping theme. Not worth your time, keep scrolling.

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So far I’m enjoying where the story is going and how it’s developing. However, and I cannot say this kindly. The grammar and spelling is absolute s**t. Author I would heavily recommend you edit the writing and get something like Grammarly. You’re going to lose a lot of readers by chapter 2.

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I decided to read this novel, because I actually read the "original". You could say I wanted to read a fanfiction of 'Warlock of the Magus World'. Instead I got a completely independent book that is very loosely based on the world of the prior mentioned story. This story has an old monster who actually uses his brain, but still experiences new things with an open mind, which makes for a very likeable mc. Sidecharacters are not cardboard cutouts, but get actual characterdevelopment, which allows realistic interactions and bonds. Mc is scheming and ruthless to his enemies, but amicable and open to friends, family and subordinates, which is, at least in my eyes, ideal. Worldbuilding is well done, the very bare bones are from WotMW, but everything else is original and very well thought out. At the end, if I am asked if I can recommend this story, I'd have to say: Wholeheartedly Please read this outstanding piece of fiction and decide for yourself. Have a nice day reading, folks

This is a good read. I like the characters and the storyline is very good. All I got to say keep up the good work and please do not drop the novel.