Hey everyone... I gonna give me stars. This is my first time writing a novel so please be patient with me.
(And for my English is not my native language. So sorry for mistakes.)
` • v • `
Have a good day everyone.
5 years ago
4
BeriAH
Over all, a very interesting concept! The grammar can get messy, requiring that I re-read chapters in order to understand them fully. However, the story presented is incredibly unique! With a bit of polish, this will become a real gem!
5 years ago
1
Sagar_Kumar_4740
Very original concept ,slightly cliche but applauded efforts.if only author can continue this story, it will be a hit.thank you.
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Hey everyone... I gonna give me stars. This is my first time writing a novel so please be patient with me. (And for my English is not my native language. So sorry for mistakes.) ` • v • ` Have a good day everyone.
Over all, a very interesting concept! The grammar can get messy, requiring that I re-read chapters in order to understand them fully. However, the story presented is incredibly unique! With a bit of polish, this will become a real gem!
Very original concept ,slightly cliche but applauded efforts.if only author can continue this story, it will be a hit.thank you. ,😧😧🤔👍🤸🤸🤸👍👍👍👍👍👍🤸🤣🤣👍🤣👍🤣👍🤣👍🤣🤸🤣👍🤣👍🤣🤸👍🤣👍🤣👍🤣👍🤣👍🤣👍🤣👍🤣👍👍