Vampire in a changed world

Hey it's the writer here i'm gonna be shameless and give my self a good rating. It's my first time writing a story i hope you like it i have the genral idea of the story and the direction is clear for me. Leave comments if you have feedbacks or ideas that you want to see in the story

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I really like this story. It seems pretty interesting but has a few problems at the moment. First is that the Grammar needs some work. I’d recommend getting an editor to smooth things out so that it becomes more pleasant to read. Although there isn’t much development right now, that’s something that can be added in over time so just work on that slowly. It’s a pretty fun read and I hope this one can make some progress and become a bit novel :)

Only negative thing I can say is that the story is to scattered, world development would help immensely. Everything else will get better as the author writes and learns the dos and Dont’s. looking forward to him teleporting to the celebrity crush and seeing what happens there. Hopefully that chapter will be released soon. Great premise hope author sticks with it. <3

Great story so far. Could use some tune ups on grammar but otherwise awesome story. 😍🤩😍🤩😘🤩 so keep up the awesome work author 🤩🤩🤩🤩

Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc

This novel is short but fun.... I hope author to keep writing this novel every day with new chapter, genre genderbender yuri vampire op and harem is very Delicious

This is Interesting story, sudden apocalypse because God pity mc life who not have Interesting life... So god Make mc life more fun? If you like vampire, genderbender, yuri and game system this novel is for you

very good story, just hope there are more updates.i like the character development although i would like to see the mc get a few more skills but over all a terrific effort.

This book is really good and I wish there was more chapters to read of this amazing world. Please write more chapters and finish the book.