The Creed of An Avenger

Not much to say really. I'm a fan of Arifureta. And I'm definitely enjoying this fanfic. The novel starts out in an interesting way, then it sticks to cannon to till the dungeon, once it reaches that point, it starts diverting and taking it's own route to originality. But best part about this is that the author introduced a number of OC, and even introduced other elements and ideas that were outside the plot, probably as preparation for multiverse travels.

I love how the story started. The mc is cool but neither edgy nor a Saint. I'm also a fan of Arifureta. So. Yeah. Finally I participed a little in the initial creation. So I know the author will do a very good job. If he doesn't I will spank him😂😂.

Very disappointing. Was expecting a ruthless MC, looking towards their goal and being smart about it. No unnecessary emotions or interactions. Just straight to the point. MC here is copied out of the anime but made worse, as shown by his unrealistic interactions with others. His unusual trust towards strangers and his lack of emotional control make his background and character inconsistent with each other, contributing to the frustrating experience that this story provides. The sentient system doesn’t help either, as their dialogues continue to show lack of the maturity which is expected from someone who has experienced the extreme levels pain and torture such as him. Not only that, the fact that he chooses to sacrifice himself protecting the people he has known for only a few days clearly illustrates either his extreme naivety or the author’s poor choice of plot points, both of which should not be present in a story such as this. In conclusion, this novel is not for those who dislike unrealistic revenge stories or immature naive protagonists. Anyone who has moved past mainstream anime should probably stay away, as this story will bring you major frustration.

Shameless Author here xD Writing quality - I'd say, it's not the best because I have seen way worse writing styles. I'm still trying my hardest to learn new things Stability of updates - I have always published 7 chapter every week, so you can't complain. Story development - The plot is somewhat slow as I always try to do my best for character development. Character design - Hm, I can't decide it and leave it up for the readers. World background - The original really lacked world building and I'm doing my best to improve that perspective in this fan fiction.

To be honest this is a nice novel which gives some warm feelings while not having to get lost so its fun but its not very interesting to read a whole chapter of just flirting of the mc and the girls so plz fix dat

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Loved it author-sama...Keep up the good work.. ... . .....140.......140......140.......140.......140........140........140.........140.....

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This is a fanfic that is really worth your time. It's got everything that you would want from this type of story. If you start and think that this is just a copy of the original plot, then you haven't read far enough. Admittedly it does take time, but you will be happy that you stayed around for when it does as it's an amazing story. (🍋 included 😁)

A nice and refreshing story. Mc is likable in most cases. Some moderate overshadowing is also there. While not a masterpiece, but it is a very enjoying experience. I would like for mc to take girls from different works into earth and make an organisation.

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I give this book a 5 star review because I think it is the right thing to do and you cant stop meh.

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I don’t know if it was just me but I’m the earlier chapters I thought it was kinda boring and sticking to canon like glue, but once it got started for real this story instantly became one of the ones I look forward to the most. If you’re just starting off, don’t leave too early or you’ll be missing out