Cleanup Department

I really like and love the story and the mc's personality and me doing a review already shows how much I love the story.. . . . . . . . . . . .

Well, you don't need this review, but I do. There is 2 very big problems with this novel, that makes me a bit of mad... As a dork on powers and power-levels, I have a problem with this system. Let me ask you, if you see a 100 thousands points of strength, when an new characters have just 10 in all stats, how strong you think it is? A tricky question, enough to break a wall.... I'm not kidding,okay. Apparently, f class stats in fate takes 400.000 thousands points and would be more than 1000 levels in this system.... How the ****?! All those overpowered skills from fate in ex ratings? Just some little boosts in certain situations and little flat boost to his statistics.... I would call it a scam, but oh well. On the other hands, mc is not op and struggling a lot in fights... That he logically shouldn't. I don't know how to take it, on the one hand, I don't like when all those stats and skills seems to be a scam, on the other, op mc is a bit bland, especially when he's best talent lies in farming... Maybe, you can just rework it? So people have easier time to understand? And second and it a bit more of objective problems. Reading first chapters and synopsis, you will expect some really evil /bad mc, right? Thinking it's would be someone new, not some struggling bipolar teenagers, who afraid of relationships and afraid of how evil he is, right? Well, **** you, and **** me. That's what you get. Some weird drama, that have no sense giving his background. Some emotional weaknesses, that look like belong in other type of stories. And a lot of lovey-dovey girls, even his yandere skill seems to be a rood. Yeah it's corny, very inconsistent and generally hurt me far more, than I expected it. It's look like different ideas that looks cool in author tastes, from shounen manga fights, some from shoujo dramas, and some from weird comedies, clash together with some angsty edgy stuff, right from 90s. Conclusion, if you come reading synopsis, for some really evil mc or harem without goody two shoes mc, well it's not exactly it. It's not so bad rating still pretty high, but when I look at those two huge problems, and read author thoughts, I became kind of upset. It's really sound like, I know it's stupid, but because I I say it should be so, that means you fall in my plan! - yeah, no. You can just rework you system, at least....

thanks for the fanfiction because I really like the fact that you did not write any thing like mc saving someone or mc is weak to girls like other mc where just a random girl glare at mc then he would be scared. I also like the mc's personality because he does not care whether they are girl or boy, he treats them equally true equality where he treats everything equal. I also like it when mc can stop his girls from doing harm to mc, just because they are close to mc does not mean they could or should harm the mc, it is like someone got close to you then gives them the right to hit you just them being unreasonable. I also don't really care if the mc is manipulative because it just makes it more exciting. I don't really care if there are little to no r-18 because it doesn't really matter for me but could you, author, make a line where or if they have s*x just write like after they had s*x or just like time skip it really is ok. overall the fanfic is great for me.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

is author a simp because mc is simp still bachelor even he's op and twisted person still can't touch a girl like author like mc in real life sad author virgin

I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet these hands will never tap anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!

I try to get in to this. But after chapter 20 it was very weird, okay. I don't understand like anything. Power level and how ability can suck my dick, I don't want to deal with this. Because when you fuse like 3 most ultimate stands in jojo and give it boost from golden arrow, you get something that could be taken down by grandpa of Miu from Kenichi? Just no. And of course a lot of weird dramas, if you truly expect to have a ruthless mc which does what he want, like using mind control on girls and whatnot...it's is not. He just some broken-hearted bitch that need a lot of girls to sustain himself as human being. Yeah, totally works with everything that we know before of him. Either way, those farming parts, upgrading stuff (that have no meaning) just goes and goes and goes... I lost my shit, okay. I couldn't bring myself to read. Conclusion. If you close eyes on weird power leveling, won't be picky with character development and consistency. You get actually a normal novel about farming and upgrading with family bs. And without any аdult stuff and proper harem... Well for 24 chapters straight. Like I said, it's hard. 😞

i have no idea what was here but it was in my library..........................................................................................................

I still don't understand many things from this fanfic till chapter 34, but okay, I will persevere and read till the latest chapter! The story revolve around Nasuverse (Fate) (maybe that is what I want to believe).

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New reader novel seems interesting...... 140 Characters

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