Cultivator in the MCU

Terrible dialogue, not a very bright mc. Dropped when that conversation with some zombie happened. Had high Hope's and they crashed and burned

Keep it up author and don’t give up midway!!! 140 characters

The story is all over the place, sometimes he's at Asgard and the next he's fighting those aliens that invade NY with no good explanation on how he got there. I dropped it when he got all angry over Agent Coulsen's death, like he didn't know it was coming. It said in the beginning he was an avid Marvel fan.

Didnt like it. It could've been much better. I thought it was going to be a decent fanfic but it turned out to be horrific. Even then I'll come and check your fanfic out cuz I like your idea. Well we'll see if you've improved

just some basic op reincarnation due to rob shenanigans. also this should be in the fanfic area. i wish people would at least do better character insertion just make them a original inhabitants why do you always need them to world hop there

Giant walls of text, headache inducing. No editing.

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Shameless author self review. Still learning how to write and I hope that as I slowly progress through the story that my writing should get better and better as I go.

what I mad about this novel is the way MC act without thinking about the consequences of playing with the butterfly effect and the way that he cultivate doesn't get any struggle like the real wuxia novel.

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