Terrible dialogue, not a very bright mc. Dropped when that conversation with some zombie happened. Had high Hope's and they crashed and burned
4 years ago
12
Munchnax
Keep it up author and don’t give up midway!!!
140 characters
4 years ago
5
Be_n
The story is all over the place, sometimes he's at Asgard and the next he's fighting those aliens that invade NY with no good explanation on how he got there. I dropped it when he got all angry over Agent Coulsen's death, like he didn't know it was coming. It said in the beginning he was an avid Marvel fan.
4 years ago
4
Depressed_Panda
Didnt like it. It could've been much better. I thought it was going to be a decent fanfic but it turned out to be horrific. Even then I'll come and check your fanfic out cuz I like your idea. Well we'll see if you've improved
Not bad😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
4 years ago
3
Darcksage
Giant walls of text, headache inducing. No editing.
4 years ago
3
iceguy
just some basic op reincarnation due to rob shenanigans. also this should be in the fanfic area. i wish people would at least do better character insertion just make them a original inhabitants why do you always need them to world hop there
4 years ago
3
Phoenixrd
Shameless author self review. Still learning how to write and I hope that as I slowly progress through the story that my writing should get better and better as I go.
4 years ago
3
TheRandomGuy
what I mad about this novel is the way MC act without thinking about the consequences of playing with the butterfly effect and the way that he cultivate doesn't get any struggle like the real wuxia novel.
4 years ago
2
Saiyan_Of_God
UUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Where is the UPDATE???????!!!!!....................................................................,............
a year ago
0
Mercury_Dragon
Really enjoyed the story I know it has been 12 months so I doubt you will come back to this book but I really hope you do.
An interesting take on mcu,but you could use a little improvement on the grammar and paragraph spacing. All is good though and keep it up good story
4 years ago
0
aaelite1
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Terrible dialogue, not a very bright mc. Dropped when that conversation with some zombie happened. Had high Hope's and they crashed and burned
Keep it up author and don’t give up midway!!! 140 characters
The story is all over the place, sometimes he's at Asgard and the next he's fighting those aliens that invade NY with no good explanation on how he got there. I dropped it when he got all angry over Agent Coulsen's death, like he didn't know it was coming. It said in the beginning he was an avid Marvel fan.
Didnt like it. It could've been much better. I thought it was going to be a decent fanfic but it turned out to be horrific. Even then I'll come and check your fanfic out cuz I like your idea. Well we'll see if you've improved
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Not bad😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Giant walls of text, headache inducing. No editing.
just some basic op reincarnation due to rob shenanigans. also this should be in the fanfic area. i wish people would at least do better character insertion just make them a original inhabitants why do you always need them to world hop there
Shameless author self review. Still learning how to write and I hope that as I slowly progress through the story that my writing should get better and better as I go.
what I mad about this novel is the way MC act without thinking about the consequences of playing with the butterfly effect and the way that he cultivate doesn't get any struggle like the real wuxia novel.
UUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Where is the UPDATE???????!!!!!....................................................................,............
Really enjoyed the story I know it has been 12 months so I doubt you will come back to this book but I really hope you do.
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An interesting take on mcu,but you could use a little improvement on the grammar and paragraph spacing. All is good though and keep it up good story
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.