Just please dont di harem, its getting boring you know when u write some stupid harem action
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5 years ago
35
Inferno_Vor
Writing quality is good.
Stability of updates is bad lately.
The story is pretty bad. So it's a classic OP MC story but it's awfully boring and fast. Badically MC gets OP magic becomes god of ishgar just because he is powerful from the getgo and makes a harem.
Now the characters are godawful. Honestly best way to describe females from the show in this book is as sex deprieved dolls that'll basically agree with anything MC wants. Like for gods sake the goddess marries him cause he saw her panties, after 3 months with erza, he confesses and is like oh btw I have a harem, but Erza is like you should've told me before confessing, *proceeds to jump onto mc for a makeout session* "Sure".... Almost the same for every other girl where they fall for him, he invites them to harem and sex...
The world is a glorified sex story that tries to act like there's plot, just to build to any sex scene later on...
Tbh the writer could've just written a sex novel and it'd be the same quality and more people would like it cause there's an audience for that, but this acts like there's a story when the mc could basically already kill anyone he wants but he stays just for sex with girls and the *amazing* relationships he *develops* with them
5 years ago
31
LonleyTyrant
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5 years ago
27
DarthVegito
This novels rating is fake. Majority of the reviews are multiple reviews form the same people. Either they are bots or they know they author and helped
him/her out by boosting the rating lol what a joke
4 years ago
25
Ghost_Devil
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4 years ago
9
Re_start
I enjoy this book, but more so as a guilty pleasure. Objectively, the writing quality is only a bit better than other on-site fanfictions, update schedule is respectable, the story development... I don't want to open that can of p0t4t0es - ask a question if you want. Character design is HORRIBLE. You take already mediocre, good, or great characters and ruin them. In what world does Erza say "Babe", or, "Baka." The world background is okay, it's a fanfiction so that's to be expected. Honestly, I don't know why I enjoy this fanfic, but I do.
5 years ago
6
Int_Ink
Author is a typical person who doesn't want to listen to other people's suggestions. You have several works with hundreds of chapters but still with the same quality of writing? I'm really confused. I'm guessing you're just writing for your own pleasure not to please others as you say.
This story can be sum up in one word FAST. The story has a lot of time skips so everything is like a blur forming the characters interaction with each other to relationships developing everything happens quickly. Almost all the story just happens with no explanation. For example Ezra and the mc go on a mission then there’s a time skip and there close enough to ask each other out, and we see none of it skips it like it doesn’t matter. So it feels like the readers are missing out.
5 years ago
3
Quem_Matou_Owen
Eu li ate o capítulo 10 e achei a historia super forçada e sem sentido,o protagonista quase não tem personalidade, e os diálogos não tem emoção,os personagen tem 0 desenvolvimento o autor simplismente pula os dias e diz "agora eles são amigos"
5 years ago
2
Lindor
Se siente muy forzado, las personalidades de sus mujeres ni siquiera se distinguen, parecen todas iguales, la diosa interfiriendo tambien es bastante molesta.
5 years ago
2
Moontakim_Khondker
Such an awesome story. I feel blessed along with the other readers. God I am such a fairy tail fan. The more I read the more I wanna be a part of the story. Morals change people but it is the thought that counts.
3 years ago
2
HolyJuan
I know this review might come off as bashing so I apologize in advance if it does so. I also want to mention that this review was written after I read up to chapter 27 so there is still a chance the story improves in later chapters.
-First I’m gonna explain things I didn’t enjoy and then I’ll explain why you might want to still read it.
1) The writing is Pretty bad, I would give it a 2/5. You can still read the story but don’t expect to be immersed, because you will have to correct a lot of errors as you read.
2) The characters don’t feel like themselves at all. They seem to be there in name and appearance only, while their personalities went out the window.
3) The flow of the story just feels forced and akward to me. There are many moments that scream ‘cringe’ and the writing itself also adds fuel to the fire.
-Now for why you might want to still read it.
1) Djinn! If you are a fan of ‘magi’ then you might want to give it a read.
2) If all you care about is a harem then why not give this a shot. Be warned however that there weren’t any ‘R-18’ moments from the chapters I read. If thats what your looking for.
3) The MC is OP and tends to solve all scenarios rather quickly. In fact, the MC never used his full prowess from the chapters I read. Perhaps author was doing this to get to the big moments in ‘fairy tale’ or to just finish the story quickly, I might never know.
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Just please dont di harem, its getting boring you know when u write some stupid harem action ............................................
Writing quality is good. Stability of updates is bad lately. The story is pretty bad. So it's a classic OP MC story but it's awfully boring and fast. Badically MC gets OP magic becomes god of ishgar just because he is powerful from the getgo and makes a harem. Now the characters are godawful. Honestly best way to describe females from the show in this book is as sex deprieved dolls that'll basically agree with anything MC wants. Like for gods sake the goddess marries him cause he saw her panties, after 3 months with erza, he confesses and is like oh btw I have a harem, but Erza is like you should've told me before confessing, *proceeds to jump onto mc for a makeout session* "Sure".... Almost the same for every other girl where they fall for him, he invites them to harem and sex... The world is a glorified sex story that tries to act like there's plot, just to build to any sex scene later on... Tbh the writer could've just written a sex novel and it'd be the same quality and more people would like it cause there's an audience for that, but this acts like there's a story when the mc could basically already kill anyone he wants but he stays just for sex with girls and the *amazing* relationships he *develops* with them
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This novels rating is fake. Majority of the reviews are multiple reviews form the same people. Either they are bots or they know they author and helped him/her out by boosting the rating lol what a joke
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I enjoy this book, but more so as a guilty pleasure. Objectively, the writing quality is only a bit better than other on-site fanfictions, update schedule is respectable, the story development... I don't want to open that can of p0t4t0es - ask a question if you want. Character design is HORRIBLE. You take already mediocre, good, or great characters and ruin them. In what world does Erza say "Babe", or, "Baka." The world background is okay, it's a fanfiction so that's to be expected. Honestly, I don't know why I enjoy this fanfic, but I do.
Author is a typical person who doesn't want to listen to other people's suggestions. You have several works with hundreds of chapters but still with the same quality of writing? I'm really confused. I'm guessing you're just writing for your own pleasure not to please others as you say.
Good..........................................................................................................Diamond..............................Exellent...............
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This story can be sum up in one word FAST. The story has a lot of time skips so everything is like a blur forming the characters interaction with each other to relationships developing everything happens quickly. Almost all the story just happens with no explanation. For example Ezra and the mc go on a mission then there’s a time skip and there close enough to ask each other out, and we see none of it skips it like it doesn’t matter. So it feels like the readers are missing out.
Eu li ate o capítulo 10 e achei a historia super forçada e sem sentido,o protagonista quase não tem personalidade, e os diálogos não tem emoção,os personagen tem 0 desenvolvimento o autor simplismente pula os dias e diz "agora eles são amigos"
Se siente muy forzado, las personalidades de sus mujeres ni siquiera se distinguen, parecen todas iguales, la diosa interfiriendo tambien es bastante molesta.
Such an awesome story. I feel blessed along with the other readers. God I am such a fairy tail fan. The more I read the more I wanna be a part of the story. Morals change people but it is the thought that counts.
I know this review might come off as bashing so I apologize in advance if it does so. I also want to mention that this review was written after I read up to chapter 27 so there is still a chance the story improves in later chapters. -First I’m gonna explain things I didn’t enjoy and then I’ll explain why you might want to still read it. 1) The writing is Pretty bad, I would give it a 2/5. You can still read the story but don’t expect to be immersed, because you will have to correct a lot of errors as you read. 2) The characters don’t feel like themselves at all. They seem to be there in name and appearance only, while their personalities went out the window. 3) The flow of the story just feels forced and akward to me. There are many moments that scream ‘cringe’ and the writing itself also adds fuel to the fire. -Now for why you might want to still read it. 1) Djinn! If you are a fan of ‘magi’ then you might want to give it a read. 2) If all you care about is a harem then why not give this a shot. Be warned however that there weren’t any ‘R-18’ moments from the chapters I read. If thats what your looking for. 3) The MC is OP and tends to solve all scenarios rather quickly. In fact, the MC never used his full prowess from the chapters I read. Perhaps author was doing this to get to the big moments in ‘fairy tale’ or to just finish the story quickly, I might never know.