System Nemesis
Between the howls and wails, the screams and cries of women being raped, and the villagers being eaten and butchered like cattle, there was a middle-aged man who was desperately running away while yelling his lungs out.
''Why.... WHY!!! YOU ABSOLUTE FUCKERS!!!''
His clothes were in tatters and marred in blood, with his body being barely able to function. His state was simply beyond recognition.
As for where he was running to... It didn't matter... He just wanted to flee the hellish scene that was unfolding behind him.
His remote village, the one he had lived in his entire life, was now a fiery beacon illuminating the night.
''Whyyyyy areeeeeee youuuuuuuuuu runninnnnnnnnnnng awwaaayyyy froooooom usssssssss?''
Terrifying low growls and voices could be perceived behind him, and every time he heard them, his body released adrenaline to try to override its limits, but to no avail as his injuries were just too severe.
The humanoid creatures pursuing him were like shadows, barely distinguishable through the cover of the night.
Their eyes, akin to black holes, were fixed on their prey as it struggled for its pathetic life. Their faint and sinister giggles kept reverberating through the darkness...
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As blood rushed up his throat and leaked at the corners of his mouth, his sinister appearance aggravated to where he resembled a devil.
During his maniacal laugh, his punctured lungs had finally given out, causing his whole body to collapse on the ground and dyeing it a scarlet shade.
His mind went blank, while his consciousness left his battered body.
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After what appeared to be a few minutes, he suddenly woke up.
He was startled at first, but he soon realized that he had indeed died.
Everything around him was black, without an ounce of life in sight.
He was basically a spirit floating in the absolute void.
''So this is what happens when you die... You just drift in darkness... That's actually underwhelming. I wonder if I'll just fade away''
When Derrick's thoughts started to drift, a prompt appeared in front of him.
[Welcome to System Nemesis, Derrick Tarlin]
[Would you like to seek revenge? Yes/No]
Well, it's been a while! After having been on hiatus for a long year, I've come back to continue this novel. It's been a long journey, and one where its chapters have gone through countless iterations where I've tried to fix any plot holes I've left behind. Being a writer isn't always easy, and I'm well aware that not everyone will like my work, which is perfectly fine! However, I hope you'll give it a chance :) Happy reading!
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CAN YOU PLEASE MAKE THESE CHAPTERS FREE BECAUSE I DONT HAVE MUCH FREE PASS BUDDY AND I REALLY LOVE THIS NOVEL...so can you free this novel since it's have potential and many readers will leave because of this
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this is amazing i enjoyed it so much and big thanks for the author for making this you are amazing so keep going on and hoping for more ccccccooooooooooooooooooollllllllllllllllllllllll
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It had potential and then the main character got really r***-y and it just felt unnatural and weird
Day 1 of waiting until author releases a new chapter :) 🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼 🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹
I have really enjoyed this novel thus far and have fallen in love with the characters and the power scaling thus far. I know there have been people who don't like the way some things were portrayed or how story was progress in certain ways, but as an author myself who was struggling and trying to advance my writing ability I really like what has bee done so far. Personally I can't wait for the new version of this book. Author please take your time to love what you write and that it's true to what you wanted. I promise you that in the end you won't regret it and people will love your book as much as I fo if not more.
Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
Good story, MC is OP but lacks knowledge and decision making, doesnt always thinks steps ahead before doing something. Also what is the purpose of those 100 death knight is his not ever gonna use it?
please post more chapters brother, don't drop it I really need more chapters.😢😢 I am impressed by everything in this story, sometimes i do have problems but those are just minor issues. Also even if there are bad reviews don't let them affect you and please continue writing.
I cant stress how much i love this book. and ive been really disapointed by the three month wait period the story is geat and the mc is a antihero beautiful
I think its not bad but it gets Lots of hate ..... no story is perfect But this is by no means a bad read and i had to Complain about Anything it would be the lack of good character discription