Successor of humanity
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26.11.20: I will propably continue wirting at the end of this year. I have already reworked FTL and Psionics and have a plan of what to do.
23.12.20: As I said, I have reworked FTL and Psionics, but I have no idea of what to write. For now this novel is paused indefinitely. Maybe some day I will pick it up again. Ill post two chapters in Volume 0 whit the new FTL System as well as Psionics. Feel free to use them with credit. See you! （＾∀＾●）ﾉｼ
Prometheus the last invention of humanity.
In the year 20XX humans began an all out war which ended in the destruction of the biosphere and civilization.
Researchers from all over the world worked together in the last years of the war to store all information humanity has gathered and to create an AI that was worthy to be successor of them.
This is where this story starts.
This is my first work, I hope you enjoy it!
Nice short chapters and definitely has potential. The concept is very interesting, but the novel would definitely benefit from a bit of polishing.
It is a good short book. There are some small spelling and grammatical errors, but nothing that makes it unintelligible. Seems to have a good story idea, however it needs some work on providing information on the technological development of the time. It also has really large jumps in time, making it.sometimes difficult to track what is happening. It would also be useful to explain in more detail the challenges a character may face and the specific steps to how they overcame it. Best character is by far Thot because of the name.alone. Ooh my first serious review :D. Hope you have a wonderful day!