Viking undead

This was honestly quite good, the ntr that people complain about isn't really disturbing since it was just a crush(they also didn't actually have a relationship) and it was common in those times. The grammar is good, updates at an acceptable rate imo, what really upsets me is how he treated his daughter. The dude straight up leaves her for thousands of years and his excuse is 'I forgot,' if you can get past that then it's a good novel.

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Had me hooked the first few chapters but then the harem started..... I still don't see the appeal with harem in stories. Harem just ruin stories and it's disgusting.

i always find some book with 3.7 stars and a lot of negative review and sometime they be lies, but goddanm i regret reading this one... writing quality 5 stars its well writing to me no grammatical errors so its good.. updates 4 stars not bad... story development and character design 1 star both, mc is just trash nothing good about him to me, nothing to relate to, to chapter 10 didn't make 1 good decision... and the story is just weird author trying to come out as someone who has seen it all,and trying to put it all on this book, even if this thing happen back in the days doesn't mean i want to read about them on webnovel i ll just check others website for that... world background thats a 3 this is a fanfic... not my cup of tea, but i can see that 1% enjoying this good luck to y'all. { and sure i just read to chapter 10 but i have seen enough to know its not getting better and even if it does the beginning is really off putting}

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Everything started good, the mc became a leader of his own tribe, started a technological uplift, gave the people ways to farm and make war, and then suddenly the mc leaves his people because reasons , seriously I don't understand why. So much development for the tribe and suddenly it gets all dropped and I have to put high stars because this ****ty platform doesn't show low star reviews on the novel main page

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I really like this story and I think you doing a good job of writing it but I think after you finish this story you should make a re-write that much more detail.

Nothing to do with the review, but from your title: Viking Undead, you could maybe have gone with Draugr, an undead/zombie from Norse Mythology

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