Alex Hall had a second chance, but he never imagined ending up in the world that ended. Disclaimer: I do not own the franchise nor the characters associated with it except for my own original characters. This is all done purely as a hobby and my own form of entertainment. I do not own the cover page, it was an artwork I took from Pinterest. If you are the owner and want me to take it down, contact me.
Dont like it. People not having empathy or little doesnt mean they dont desire relationships or love. And this mc is running away from everything even things he shouldnt have to run from also. People dont just randomly lose control of their power only when a external factor is included or they have some condition its just like anger it doesnt come from nowhere usually
Very interesting. A decisive MC, he does not hesitate in his decisions, wise, intelligent, a little cold but that comes from his detachment from life. This novel has many things that appeal to me, and I recommend it. (Use translator from Latin Spanish to English. In case you don't understand something)
the writing is kinda ****ed up, like in one or two places but other than that its okay..now the story...its dope..MC has gravity powers.....and he isnt afraid to use em,,,like dude just crushed people...he aint no *****...this is dope continue....anyone fucks with MC, crush em..anyone tires to kill em....obliterate em........ suggestion: fundamental forces...give MC the entire package......make MC use his brains,,,,add some romance and fluff, just pls build it.....no shallow ****...also dont make any popular paring,,,try to do something new...**: no dxd style ****,,,if ya do it..do warn, dont want to read about a pokemon MC who go after moms and wives
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This is what I’ve been looking for **** beta male mcs ‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️
A very device mc that is not device at all and chapter 11 I call bull.s.hit why?cause he could kill black wido but nooioi you got to go on an extra mile and be fucking idot and the testing POWER is bull.s.hit but am still gonna read and she how much bull.s.hit there is
Equipo harem, Gwen, Rogue, Natasha, Jean, Felicia, Wanda, Kitty y Sue. $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$#########$$$$$$$$$$$$$$__$$_____$$#$_$##$$$__$$$$$__$$$$_____$$$__$$$$$$$___$_____$$__$$$$___
MC is a really powerful mutant with little regard to everything around him, He is not scared of death and continues to push himself to his limits even it means being half dead. Truthfully it is a must-read it will make your blood pumping real hard. Amazing sir just amazing. 😍🙃😜😘
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if you are here for god of mutant like the title you are at the wrong fanfic..... the writing is alright,,, update is good too and that's it... mc is weak, weird and make some questionable decision. to me mc is like a lost, edgy child with power.. in conclusion read it to pass time if you have nothing better to do..
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I have just finished two chapters and the writing is giving me a headache. It's like someone put everything in the blender and the mess that came out is this story. I don't have any problems with your characters or your story, but your writing definitely needs a recheck. The sentences are mangled, the grammar is well- not there, paragraphs are disjointed and the punctuations are dead. Seriously, run it through a word processor or have it checked through Grammarly or any of its substitutes.