Viewing the day he turned adult as a start of his misfortune, Eddra was forced to join the military against his will.
Struggling from the bleeding in the midst of striving to survive in the war, with more than half of his teammates and the knight major died, he simply gave up on living.
Eddra rested his heavy eyelids and the memories of his childhood flashed by his mind. However, instead of dying, he woke up at the same place where he was patiently waiting for his death.
[You've awakened the System.
Do you wish to reset? Yes / No]
A story of a dying knight acquiring a forceful [System], stuck in a war between the two nations of which was resulted by a hideous traitor.
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Updates 5 chapters a week.
Very interesting! The author writes very well and I especially love the development into a game world. I'm excited to see where it heads from here :)
The story gets your curiosity but later on, it gets your attention. It is still too early to judge the story from any standpoint as it is still a prologue, but I can tell that it's taking a good path already because it really makes you want to read more. I'll definitely keep up with it
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Well-developed characters, world background could use some work, story development is a little bit too rushed I think, and the writing quality is good as well. The theme is similar to solo leveling. Interesting. Keep it up! <3
Science fiction The world background seems a little unclear but we're still on the 6th chapter so let's see The characters are extremely interesting and the dialogues too :) Keep going✨
It's a good start,the story is eye catching when you go through the synopsis,if you maintain what's written in the synopsis,you will have a great outcome,wish you all the best I your writing journey.
Beautiful title page. The story is unusual. The text block is interesting, but there are some obscure points. The world itself is not yet clearly registered, as indeed is the character himself. But in general, the idea of the novel looks promising and interesting. For a small number of chapters, it is difficult to evaluate the novel, but from what I was able to read, I had such a subjective opinion. The author of success in his work!
The story is good. The synopsis did its part well, drawing the interest of the reader. The chapters so far are solid and engaging. Hope you continue to write it.
This is another case of "still too early to give a proper review", but this seems like it will be a fun series. It's about a kid who starts playing a game version of his early life. Thankfully this is not a case where the writer just spends twelve chapters on world building, but instead actually properly tells the story by focusing on the main character. The premise is really fun and opens up doors for many cool possibilities. The only problem right now is that the main character is sorta bland. I hope he gets more personality in the future, cause right now, I think even the butler would have been a better character to follow.
The story is good, I read two chapters and so far the world building is developing quite nicely, although I can't say anything about the character development since there are only 3 chapters available. Overall it's quite a nice read, keep up the goodwork!
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