Daluo Dalu- The Heart of Eternity (My Version)

The name is Douluo Dalu not Dalou Dalu xPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxPxP

Nice plot story But need more chapter If author want more sprit stone Lol me Dhdusidueidusissiajabsjsowoshwhsjdusududueidodididudhdjdbedudisowjshdudidjdgeudidisidhsjsjsidijsjddjdididuejdjxudjdudusisjsjsjsjsjsududjsjsjsjsj

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Grammar is a bit rough but readable. However my main complaint is the mc. He's more like a side character that follows canon. He is a bit weak willed with a convuluted background, his cutesy personality is entertaining at the start but it gets a bit annoying as the story goes on. So far the other characters see him as a naive boy or someone to worry about. This is definitely not a fanfic where the mc is badass. There are also some incorrect story details but author justifies that by saying we can't expect him to remember things he read "hundreds of thousands of years ago" and the only one he could remember clearly is naruto lol. Tldr mc is soft and not badass and story details are messy.

srsly no intro....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I like this story very much, I find it an interesting idea, and the quality is also extremely great, but I'm a bit on the back foot here, since your last story was also great, but you dropped it, please don't drop this one too, don't pay attention to negative comments and such, the story is yours and yours alone, to do as you would like.