My 18th birthday, Woah!!!!
Finally that day arrived which he was waiting for..,....
Now I can break free from the shackles of life and have fun like an adult.
The same old common life a city boy changed overnight to a inheritor of Devil's throne..........
A series of events turned his life into a living hell, in a spur of moment, life took a drastic 360° turn. He set off a journey to become the Underlord.
Stuck between the choices of his two fathers, his biological father and the current Daimao. One wants him to turn into a gentleman and lead a normal life, the other pushes him into the depths of hell to become the strongest in both the worlds, the mortal world and the netherworld.
Embark on the adventurous journey of the Underlord.........
Behold, the beginning of the new Dai Mao era (Demon lord era)
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Keep up the good work. This is a promising story. Relatable and unique mc! Don't go to beta road plz and Is there any romance afterward? Quite different writing styles, but I saw too many missing or misused punctuation. And how about recheck the excess spacing and some capitalization? Overall is nice!
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Greetings to the author. Always a sucker for a good fantasy novels. A separate world from the normal with magic and fighting, amazing! I also love the story and character development, amazing stuff. Please do well to edit the chapters and upload more... Kudos!
Ohh It got me curious how will the story end hahahha cause this feels new to me, the story is so unique and I love it! I can't wait to read more chapters of this story the first chap got me curious through the whole story gotta read more of this tomorrow cause gotta go to sleep now. Author-nim keep it up an amazing story!, [img=fp][img=recommend]
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i couldn't agree more if someone said this is promising. let the rating give the answer to you. since i never once lying on my own rating even it means i'm an author myself
Liking the development of the story. Good character plots.Good novel .....good novel....good novel...good novel......good novel...................................................hope the author fixes the slight errors though.......................💜💜
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This a story with great potential, the mc is great, not arrogant. However, the story chapters need rewriting as there are grammatical errors... But overall a gem...
It's not a smooth read because of grammatical errors. I hope you can master this basic skill as soon as you can. Here's my initial review for the potential of your story. Keep working hard and don't forget to enjoy.
The story is quite interesting. It's nice to read but it would really help if the story is polished more with proper punctuation and grammar. After proper editing it will be much better than now. I have high hopes for this.